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Well, let us leave our disagreements as is; we both have our own opinions on it, and honestly, I see no point in further discourse in a thread about rewriting our favourite stories, LOL We won't be solving the world's problems here in the SHFs =)

I chose the otter, which sounds like an exotic delicacy. Might not be a lot of meat on the bones, though.

I am an atheist; however, I have studied both as a pastime along with several other religions... They are lovely books as long as you cherry pick information from them. If you actually read them, you soon realize how bat shit insane the people in the past were... Old Testament - Incest...

besides, they already have enough hookers and other questionable things in them. They dont need any Jazzing up lol

Most novels could be jazzed up that way. I can see it now, Sam counting cards while Frodo keeps trying to get him to leave while they are still ahead. To the back side of this backroom gambling DEN, Gandalf is blowing smoke rings with a lady on each arm, telling them of the time he fought a...

my favorite stories? No BUT If I could rewrite a few others that I really enjoy, making them the new canon story, then yes, yes, I would. IE, I would finish High School of the Dead Manga, the author died, leaving it unfinished. I would rewrite High School DXD so it actually makes bloody...

I stopped one of my works because I want/need to go back to the start and begin again. I kept changing my end goal, which is fine normally, after every couple of chapters and increased my pacing to the point that I had to jump through hoops to fill all the plot holes I was making.

Did you not get angry at me for wanting to feed you the best foods, massages, and take great care of you until the day I was going to make you my dinner? Now here you are, hoaring yourself out, telling everybody to "Eat me, I am delicious. Taste me more!" That is true OnlyFans girl mentality...

He is a needy bastard that needs to be needed... quick, everyone, JayMark broke the code! Get your free likes!

Lol I was making sure I had the right book it was from. I couldn't remember if it was 2 or 3

The story so far: In the beginning the Universe was created. This has made a lot of people very angry and been widely regarded as a bad move. -The Restaurant at the End of the Universe, Book #2 of The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams Jinx

Make sure you explore that, at least a bit, else it will feel hollow. Trying to recover a loved one from the brink of death, and having her other personality alive as a monster in a dungeon seems to have a few interesting routes you could explore.

Yeah, it sounds like it could be a massive arc, lots of character development. Maybe even a full 'Book' of trying to recover a lost love.

You are an amazing person, and most people say nice things about you. Are you sure you won't answer any questions? I am sure your admirers are curious about how you feel about the accusations that you are *Checks notes* the Baldest SHF member?

/shrug There are worse fates to be had in this thread alone. #turducken =P

Thank you, I'll take that as a compliment of the highest order.

Sunlight began to peek through the bedroom window of a small coastal villa in Costa Rica, awakening @AnonUnlimited from his slumber. He had been up late on his computer, gambling on horse races yet again, though it wasn't really gambling to him. He didn't lose one bet last night, sweeping in yet...

Not necessarily an overuse of a single word. I tend to add "though" at the end of a sentence instead of the beginning, where it actually should be. Also, I will use some phrases often, and they often seem to become repetitive to me as the writer, though no one has mentioned it to me yet.