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  1. Bartun

    Hi guys! Chapter 14 of my novel Nowhere to Run has been completely rewritten! Cropped a lot out...

    Hi guys! Chapter 14 of my novel Nowhere to Run has been completely rewritten! Cropped a lot out but also added a bunch and ended up almost even, but it reads much better now! I'll leave the link below if you wish to take a look. Stay safe...
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    Just wondering... how many crossposting do you do (as in how many websites?)

    Used to post on many websites, but in the end, settled for just two, Royal Road and here. But I don't even interact with anyone in RR, just here. Not many comments :cry:
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    Gimme a fun fact about your main character/s that isn't all that important to the story but interesting to know!

    One of my MCs is a dinosaur, but everyone calls him a 'dragon' ?
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    How much do y'all re-read your chapters before publishing em?

    I always re-read a chapter at least twice before posting it.
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    Cute looking shark!

    Cute looking shark!
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    I love lying in the grass too! :giggle:

    I love lying in the grass too! :giggle:
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    How do the stories end for moral antagonists whom you like?

    Every story is different. I don't have a personal preference on how such characters should end because it depends on the story. Zuko's redemption fits well because you knew from the start he didn't have a choice, but not every character is the same, and neither are the circumstances. I'm...
  10. Bartun

    Three's the charm free feedback thread. (Closed.)

    I have fond memories of this. ? I feel torn. You're a dear friend to me, and part of me doesn't want to make you waste your time. But also, I've improved a lot, and the story you reviewed years ago has changed a lot, too. It's completely different now. It would mean a lot to me if you give...
  11. Bartun

    Writing What motivates you to finish your novel?

    I have no words... and I must cry. :s_frown:
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    Writing What motivates you to finish your novel?

    Love. You won't be able to finish anything you're doing if you don't love what you're doing.
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    Heven't been too active lately. Been working my hands to the bone this week. :s_frown:

    Heven't been too active lately. Been working my hands to the bone this week. :s_frown:
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    Recommendations Anyone have a book I can get hyped for?

    And now I'm the one making the :s_eek:?? faces! I'm kinda nervous hehe :blob_sweat:
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    I finished my story, but still no readers :cry:

    I finished my story, but still no readers :cry:
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    Morning! ?

    Morning! ?
  17. Bartun

    Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]

    Somehow, I missed this. I would love it if you could look at my novel if you are still up to it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/283095/nowhere-to-run/
  18. Bartun

    What unconventional meat have you consumed at least once in your life?

    Oh, I tried everything. Boar meat, crocodile meat, deer meat, goat meat, capibara meat, turkey meat, duck meat, and apere'a, which is a kind of wild rat. As for fish: Dorado, mandi'i, surubi, ray, you name it. The only thing I haven't tried is dog meat, cat meat, and human meat.
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