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  1. Bartun

    A few short-lived Tv shows that I loved! ?

    Space: Above and Beyond from 1996 ?
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    I think I did, but the klaxosaurs had nothing of 'saurs' in them :cry:

    I think I did, but the klaxosaurs had nothing of 'saurs' in them :cry:
  3. Bartun

    Dinogirl? ?

    Dinogirl? ?
  4. Bartun

    What is the competitive advantage of your story's premise?

    How many other stories have a talking dinosaur in them? ?
  5. Bartun

    Play devil's advocate for tropes you like.

    I always disliked the 'stupidly beautiful people' trope, but now I understand why it is so universal. As someone has put it, 'If I wanted to see someone ugly, I'd just look at the mirror'
  6. Bartun

    What makes your fiction worth reading at least once in a lifetime?

    I put all my heart into it. I think that makes it worth it.
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    How are YOU going to fix the genre you hate or dislike?

    I don't know if I could 'fix' any genre. Can barely fix my own story. :blob_sweat:
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    What little details irks you when reading?

    Sorry? About what? That's good insight. Those are signs before physical aggression, but not necessarily of 'killing intent'.
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    Take good care of my friend ?

    Take good care of my friend ?
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    What little details irks you when reading?

    There's a huge difference between trying just to hit someone and trying to outright kill someone. You can hide your intention pretty well when you don't intend to kill someone. Heck, some people get a sneak shot before kicking someone to the curb. But you absolutely cannot hide it when you're...
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    What little details irks you when reading?

    I'm guilty of this. ? In my defense, the one thinking like this isn't human and has never had a meaningful interaction with anyone before. He soon concludes he must be under a spell.
  12. Bartun

    Not music related, but back in the day it took an entire movie to take a Terminator down ?

    Not music related, but back in the day it took an entire movie to take a Terminator down ?
  13. Bartun

    Character Art

    Looking great!
  14. Bartun

    Please, not you :cry:

    Please, not you :cry:
  15. Bartun

    Happy belated birthday!

    Happy belated birthday!
  16. Bartun

    Taco, Hotdog, or Both?

  17. Bartun

    I hope so, my story has exactly 20 chapters ?

    I hope so, my story has exactly 20 chapters ?
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    Ignoring content, what do you think is the minimum number of chapters in a novel to be considered worth reading?

    Well, my story has exactly 20 chapters of the chunky ones, so I hope it doesn't get ignored. ?
  19. Bartun

    First time Scribbler. Does my Story Have a Chance?

    If you have your book already finished, then you can schedule the uploads. Don't upload it all at once; schedule it one chapter every few days. I don't know the best time/days to gain more visibility, but I'm sure others know.
  20. Bartun

    Uncommon writing advice

    This is actually pretty good advice! I've been voice-acting my scenes so much, I might as well go pro :sweat_smile:
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