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  1. Ai-chan

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    From just reading this idea, Ai-chan doesn't think it will work out well. But just because Ai-chan says so doesn't mean it won't work at all. Ai-chan has no idea how your writing skills are and maybe you can make it work. Ai-chan won't be able to make it work. Some flaws: 1. Chuunibyou The...
  2. Ai-chan

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    1. Because it was not supposed to capitalize on the isekai thing. It was written as a serious literary attempt at tragedy, fantasy and psychological genre during nanowrimo. This was not meant to be weeb isekai anime-like story. It's meant to be something like Divergence or Hunger Games thing. So...
  3. Ai-chan

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    The story follows a pair of siblings who are in love with each other but due to society's norms, decided not to pursue it. On the first day of their new school year, the whole school was transported away to another world, which they later nicknamed as Hell. Just a few hours after they arrived...
  4. Ai-chan

    I want a merit point system that utilizes authors to review reviewers

    While this request is not necessarily a bad one, Ai-chan would say no to this. Why? Because this is nothing more than red tape. You know how you want to complain about the potholes, and you go to the town hall, only to be told that you actually need to complain to the civil works ministry, only...
  5. Ai-chan

    Looking for some helpful feedback...

    It's a bit hard to say. Is English not your first language? Your sentences felt awkward. Take a deep breath, breath in and out. Then steel your stomach. If necessary, put a bag of ice on your head in case Ai-chan's words start to heat your head. That being said, do not let Ai-chan's words make...
  6. Ai-chan

    What genre fits a story that is just quotes?

    Yes, copyrights have not been much of a problem with webnovels that do not earn money. However, that is not to say 'never', people have been sent C&D for writing fanfiction before. In the early 2000s, there were plenty of fanfictions of Anne Rice's vampire novels, but Anne Rice stated in a...
  7. Ai-chan

    What genre fits a story that is just quotes?

    Non-fiction implies that the novel is not fictional, as in it's real life. But from how you describe it, it's not even a novel, so it doesn't fit non-fiction. Unfortunately, to post it on SH you need to specify a genre, so you have to choose one. On other sites, such things are classified as...
  8. Ai-chan

    Can't view Poll

    When you make the poll, you decide here. By default, only the first and third option are ticked. If you want to see who voted what, you need to tick the second one as well.
  9. Ai-chan

    Writing Prompt Create Weapons

    Guitar of Doom Materials: A guitar, sound amplifier, an absolutely tone deaf guitarist with the fingers of a rock golem. Effect: Makes every ear within 20 miles radius to bleed and all who hears the tune commit suicide from mass histeria.
  10. Ai-chan

    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Thanks for the input. Ai-chan will see if Ai-chan can take your suggestions and add it into the synopsis. The reason why the name Paint It Red is mentioned is because of the novel's title, Paint Me In Your Colours. The name Paint is important because the entire premise of the story is about her...
  11. Ai-chan

    What if ... Genghis Khan Invaded the Future?

    Unless his sword and horse is magical, he'll only get to raid, rape and pillage one village before he got hit with the full might of 155mm artillery on his face. The Legionaires would be a challenge as they were better armoured, but ultimately won't be an issue as common rifle rounds 5.66 NATO...
  12. Ai-chan

    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    This one is for Ai-chan's new story planned for nanowrimo, Paint Me In Your Colours. It is an action incest romance. No there won't be incest at start, but at some point, her big brother will leave home and she will chase after him. The game she reincarnated in is very similar to Darksouls...
  13. Ai-chan

    Write a monologue

    Ai-chan aims to please. Ai-chan would've made it 5 minutes long, but unfortunately nobody would read something that long.
  14. Ai-chan

    Write a monologue

    Shit! Shit! Shit! What have I done to deserve this? Fuck this bitch. Fuck that bitch. Fuck that other bitch too. Yeah, fuck you too, asshole! Waitwaiwait, I can't die yet! I still haven't pooped this morning. Don't you know what happens to your shitter when you die? Huh? You don't care? Who the...
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