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  1. Hathnuz

    Hathnuz's Art Thread

    Amy Firstwing from Counter:Side (Forever WIP because when I tried coloring it, the color became weird. Not going to use Clip Studio for now...)
  2. Hathnuz

    Hathnuz's Art Thread

    It's not that I dislike it. Cleaning the hair strands was so painful; I could've done it differently. I'm glad you liked it though. As for the other two, they were meant to be flat and less detailed. I wanted the style to be close to most anime or webtoon. Thank you!
  3. Hathnuz

    Hathnuz's Art Thread

    After using my tablet and experimenting with various software for roughly a week, here are the results. I'll post the characters from my novel like most authors who do art. Kane (Adobe Photoshop CS5) Liana (Krita) Xervatia (Medibang Pro) Thank you everyone who gave me advice! It's really...
  4. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Although the story is much more improved than before, everything about it is mediocre. The premise is uninteresting. As for the first chapter, well, has lots of room for improvement. The prose is stilted and while I can see the attempt for emotional writing, it just feels empty to me. I guess...
  5. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Different in style. Subjectively, I find them bad, but they might not matter much for getting readers hooked.
  6. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    I don't want to give predictions above chapter 30 anymore because it's hard to predict. Meh premise but good tags -- they should bring readers to your story quite well. The synopsis might work even though it's weird. The chapters are... different from usual; I can't really rate them...
  7. Hathnuz

    Need Digital Painting Advice

    I can't find sketch pen and ink pen in krita. Any good alternative? I've tried normal paintbrush but the stroke size is hard to control... I've learned this the hard way lol
  8. Hathnuz

    Need Digital Painting Advice

    Thank you so much for posting the guide! I really, really need this lol
  9. Hathnuz

    Need Digital Painting Advice

    Thanks! What's the approach for anime style? I want to focus on that.
  10. Hathnuz

    Need Digital Painting Advice

    I got Huion H430P for like 25 bucks + painting glove. That's cheap, right? I'm still trying out the softwares, though I'm liking Krita so far. And thanks for the link, I'll check it out.
  11. Hathnuz

    Need Digital Painting Advice

    So... I've always wanted to learn digital painting, and I finally have bought a cheap tablet to start out. To veteran digital artists out there, what advice and tips would you give to beginners like me? What are the common mistakes? And how to draw neat strokes without having to erase stray...
  12. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    I must admit. This is more unpredictable than the usual because the more chapters a story has, the more likely for it to get on trending. So, I'll make two predictions instead. The premise is fine... if the story were to be fluffier than currently. Don't get me wrong, it is a good story but has...
  13. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    While the premise seems really cool, the synopsis makes it a bit too complicated despite not badly written. The first chapter is excellent as to be expected. Honestly, the only thing that holds the story back is the cover; it's just so strange and doesn't tell what the story's about. 100-300...
  14. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    'Better' is relative. If you want your story to appeal to more readers better, the easy way is just to include litrpg, harem, op protag, etc. (If you're interested in the hard way, pm me) Or if you meant better as in story's quality, it's simple. Try to make the mc more interesting by writing...
  15. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Interesting premise but at the same time not great, just okay. Everything's fine. The first couple of chapters are well-written. However, the story's still too plain to reach high numbers. It's a good story, nonetheless... so far. Less than 150 readers by chapter 30.
  16. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Sorry to say, but I find your novel generic regardless the storytelling's quality. The premise is very bland because of the particular revenge plot that is so overdone. There are rarely successful webnovels that start with 'Chronicles of' which means it has bad title, in my opinion. The synopsis...
  17. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Although the premise isn't bad, the execution of it... could be better. The title is mediocre. The synopsis is too long; it reads like an info dump. Same goes for the first chapter. You're dumping so much info in the first paragraph, and that's not all. The pov had switched 3 times very abruptly...
  18. Hathnuz

    How to know if a story is doing good?

    Wait a minute... I don't recall your story has gender bender. Did you add that in after you asked for my prediction? Harem tag is also missing somehow.
  19. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Nope. The whole novel is just not appealing at all. Historical fantasy might work, but yours won't because it doesn't give what SH readers want nor make them care. Even a sprinkle of harem incest stepbro boys love won't save it (not that it will save any story tbh). The first chapter is hard to...
  20. Hathnuz

    I can predict whether your story will become popular or not

    Yeah, I meant that, and you're welcome.
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