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I can think some aside from anyone that's already mentioned: OokamiKasumi - most of their writing tips threads had stirred some drama. ForestDweller - he used to complain so much that people were getting annoyed by him. Motsu - they're just weird and tend to pick fights with others. Even I had...

Very niche premise, but not necessarily bad depending on the execution. Don't expect many people here reading your work. I personally find it alright, though I'm not interested reading it because I dislike reading mystery stories. Also, there's nothing groundbreaking or new with the premise and...

Why did you neglect SH in the first place anyway?

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Manga/Webcomics: Airen (Reformation of Deadbeat Noble) Akira (Rebuild World) Adam & Buddha (Record of Ragnarok) Games: Jason (Far Cry 3) Captain Price (Call of Duty: Modern Warfare) Zer0 (Borderlands 2)

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2738/the-magic-lumberjack/ Thanks in advance.

Well, my advice is just to focus one at the time. For me, quality>quantity. Reborn in fire and steel: I can't identify the story's premise. The synopsis reads like a prologue, not an actual blurb. At least, you have smut and harem tags. 100-300 readers by chapter 30. Princess Caretaker: As for...

Naruto fanfics are usually popular here, especially with smut. The premise, however, is not bad but plain. At least the title is clear and concise. The first few chapters look normal. I can't find anything that stands out, so there's that. 100-450 readers by chapter 30. Sorry, but I couldn't...

Can I ask which story was it? I've searched this entire thread and I couldn't find it. Anyway, the premise is meh. The title isn't very eye-catching. The synopsis is fine. As for the chapters, the pacing is tad bit slow and I get the impression that the story begins too early since basically...

I got 2.5 stars review because they said my story was illogical, and their best example was the currency being too inflated (which I've already fixed it easily). I mean, the criticism was valid, but the stars wasn't justified and that bothered me for weeks. Also, I got 3 stars review because...

To be honest, I didn't understand your story's premise until I read the first chapter twice. I hate the mc for now, though he's quite well written and has a unique character voice. All in all, it seems like a good story with few problems. There's almost no dialogue tags nor action tags which...

Oh, wow, there's a lot of stuff that I must go through because there wasn't any notification until now (I haven't been active on SH forum lately). Sorry for the delay again. A very niche premise (but not bad) and unfortunately, it won't do well on ScribbleHub. It might be better for you to post...

To be honest, I don't find the premise to be very appealing, but you have the two most popular tags on SH, so it'll work one way or another. As for the prose, there are occasionally redundant phrases like "whispered almost inaudibly" and "violently pushed". Everything else is fine. 200-500...

I don't usually recommend my novel, but after reading your criteria, I think you should check mine out. Please, don't be discouraged by the lack of updates; I'm planning to resume my novel this week. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2738/the-magic-lumberjack/ 1. My MC does have clear goals...

Wow, you just wrote a story that contains almost every popular trope in ScribbleHub while still being somewhat original. It seems you already understand how to attract readers, so I won't give the usual feedback. I can't say much other than the story has a great potential to become very popular...

Your story already has more than 30 chapters, so I won't predict yours. Guess I'll just confirm your bias then. I think you did everything correctly with the story (clear title, on-point synopsis, good first chapter, etc). The major fault lies on the premise. Searching for lost someone/people...

Unique premise, smut+harem tags, and great first chapter. I don't have anything to criticize except maybe the cover; the text color needs more contrast for better readability (not that the cover matters much anyway). This one has potential, though the lack of fantasy element might hold it back...