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Basic rules of gunpowder: 1. If it's wet, it won't combust 2. Sulphur does not make it burn, but as it burn, it reduces the temperature needed to ignite the whole mixture 3. If you have too much coal, it burns slowly. 4. If you have too much sulphur, it burns quickly and likely will not explode...

You don't need escalation for reader retention. If your story is good, a vanilla sex is no different from a threesome, at least when it comes to reader retention. Don't make shianshia mistake. Escalate in moderation.

Ai-chan remember reading 3 different mangas with this same premise, though. However, they're all yuri. Well, if you want to write it, go ahead. Ai-chan is just being a stick in the mud by saying that it's not particularly genre-breaking.

Ai-chan deal with it by saying, "It will be updated whenever it will be updated. If you want a particular story updated, tell Ai-chan. You don't say anything, Ai-chan assumes nobody cares."

Ai-chan is cute. Make the character a copy of Ai-chan.

The biggest issue with the whole premise is the fact that this a utopia. In a utopia, people who do not suffer hardships, will never develop the understanding of hardship. People who are not exposed to the concept of abundance, will not understand or want for abundance. In this case, everyone...

Sorry, yelling isn't Ai-chan's style. Whips. That's more of Ai-chan's passion.

In Ai-chan's opinion, 1 and 2 doesn't seem to have anything to do with 'dead amnesiac life'. Like what's with all the ofuda and the microphone? Is he being sealed? Is he a crazed satanic worshipping black metal performer? 3 doesn't seem to have anything to do with the title either, like what...

What do you mean 3 choices? There are 5. Athlete, Miko, Medium, Hunter and Psychopath.

Ey! Are you guys seriously going to make Ai-chan write he psychopath as the protagonist? He's a boring character, you know! He's all edgy, overconfident and shit!

If it's close enough to a blog, that's a blog. This is a story site, for stories. So blogs are a no. For the miscellaneous stuff, world anvil is great.

Don't know. You're putting the cart before the horse. Writing pure evil as the antagonist is just lazy writing. Ask yourself the following questions. 1. Who is this crime boss? 2. How did he grow up? 3. Why did he become the boss? 4. What was his motivation to doing the things he did? 5. Why...

Oh, so the OP lied when he said this is an SH novel made into a game when the game exists before it became an SH novel. Sounds very dishonest and douchy to Ai-chan. Like when you do something stupid like getting naked in the middle of the mall and nobody cares about it. Then you just decide to...

Unless the dick is extremely small and the foreskin is extremely long (which is probably a medical condition), it doesn't really stretch back and forth. It's actually very much like circumcised when hard, really. Most men you see in porn are circumcised so it's hard to show. Apparently women in...

Eh um, you don't normally deal with it when it's soft and the dick is covered. You deal with it when it's hard, and therefore the dick is completely outside. When you circumcise, the cock head is visible at all times. When an uncircumcised cock is completely hard, the cock head is completely...

1. Happy giddy self-introduction 2. Scene of death 3. Edgy emotional scene of vengeance or regret 4. Self-loathing introduction 5. Descriptions of horror 6. Question everything seen and heard. Then grab a 6-sided dice, and throw it. The answer is the intro you should write. That is what the...

Oh, ok. People should use the full word. To Ai-chan, AU means Astronomical Unit which obviously doesn't fit the thread.

First of all, what is AU?

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