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A joke is a joke because it's funny. If there is not enough information, people won't understand what is funny about it. If there is too much information, the joke gets diluted by the abundance of information and ceases to be funny. That's why what is funny to you may not be funny to others...

Yes, Ai-chan prepared prior to writing. Because you see, for Ai-chan, it's getting into the zone for writing that is difficult. Due to how busy Ai-chan is in real life, Ai-chan can't get into the zone often. Ai-chan is a very serious person when writing. If Ai-chan can't visualize the scene...

Luminiscent trees are certainly possible even underground. After all, you only need a chemical reaction in order to produce light. Kalium when in contact with water will create a violent reaction outputting sparks, light, Hydrogen and Kalium Hydroxide. In tiny molecular units like in plants...

Don't know why you would call that an attack. But yaoi is used all the time in Japan. Basically, BL is considered the sweet type of gay relationship. But yaoi is always sexual. So if your story has a lot of gay sex, explicit or not, that makes it closer to yaoi than BL. Ai-chan hasn't read your...

Why not use wattpad? Don't the screaming little girls there like yaoi fiction?

This paragraph is incomplete. Add sights and sounds if you don't know what else to add. Use can't here. Or if you want this to be part of the narration instead of monologue, use couldn't to be in line with the rest of your tenses. Don't uses the element of choice in doing something. Can't...

It's Ai-chan's character quirk. Just ignore it. And no, it has nothing with being cute. Japanese people regularly forgo pronouns during conversations.

As a Japanese, Ai-chan reads the first chapter with a permanent blown up face. Ai-chan doesn't know where you're from, but for Ai-chan, that was very difficult to read. Even if Ai-chan wants to help fix it, Ai-chan doesn't know where to start. This picture was taken from the internet, but this...

Shitface Cunt Dogshit Rag (short for cum rag) Smelly cunt (taken from real life hokkien curse word chau chibai) Horsefucker Loose hole Braindead bitch Turdpile Hooffeet Pooptits Cuntface (referring to face full of zits) Barn whore (referring to someone who fucks all animals) And if the...

Spend more time in the toilet. The fragrance of shit helps open your creative mind. As for engaging readers, write as if you are the character. That is not to say that you should self-insert into the character, just that you should put yourself in that character's shoes.

Hymn refers to a song. Epic refers to a poem. So unless your protagonist's journey will be made into a song, this title wouldn't fit and will continue drawing criticism to the point that you will eventually tire of it. Do with this information as you wish. Ai-chan would suggest: 1. The...

What is this political ideology thing? Ai-chan only got fascist, democratic, neutral and communist.

Ai-chan knows this is going to be a total pain in the ass for Tony to implement, but it is something that Ai-chan wants. So Ai-chan is gonna poke Tony by upvoting this. If it's too much of a trouble for Tony to implement this, Ai-chan suggests that Tony simply make the story downloadable as a...

Why not make it so that authors who want to use NSFW covers have to mark the cover as NSFW? This would save the NSFW covers in another directory separate from the main directory for normal covers? Then make it that by default NSFW covers will not be shown and the covers will only appear as a...

It is unfortunate that this is not the case. Ai-chan too had entertained the thought of inviting other authors to write stories inside a shared universe. It's too bad that a series is registered to the author instead of floating with the author credited as the creator. But Ai-chan also...

Guilty as charged. Ai-chan has deleted a story once (not on scribblehub) by accident while sleepy from working too much. About 2 seconds after Ai-chan clicked the confirmation to delete it, Ai-chan suddenly became alert and shouted "What did I just do?!!!!!!"

Pretty sure a lot of stories have war crimes. Using flames on people is war crime. So does using insect repellants on people for the sake of causing damage. If you accidentally use chemicals on people without knowing how it could harm them, it's not a war crime. Similarly, raping the locals...

They actually kicked you out? Man, RRL used to be great. But now it's just a den of elitists who thinks only people on the level of Sidney Sheldon deserves to be there.

It's just a prologue, right? Can you post it here? Ai-chan is on mobile. Switching back and forth between different pages is kind of a pain in the ass. You will find that posting the stuff you want to get feedback on in the forum will make it more likely for people to say something about it as...

Guilty as charged... But in Ai-chan's defense, Ai-chan is a mother, a housewife, a professional translator of commercial and scientific documents as well as a voice actress. So Ai-chan is very busy. When Ai-chan does have spare time, it's either write a chapter or go to sleep. Usually sleep...