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  1. CupcakeNinja

    Weekly writing prompts/ writing exercises with critique

    Uh I'm doing lesson one. Character intro. But I just copied and pasted a short chapter from one of my stories I'd neglected the past months. I chose it cuz i think it shows the best way I've been able to introduce a character so far. The type of person they are, you know. Their personality.
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    Feeding me back on my Black Witch story!! ^^

    Sorry mate I dont read stories with female succubus main characters as a general rule of thumb. Unless it's a futa story.
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    Webnovel Covers I Made

    Wonder what he's compensating for
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    How many buffer chapters do you keep?

    On the spot for me. Imake side chapters to buy time for real chapters. And still procrastinate
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    E3: Expectations and Extra. (E3EE)

    jesus christ. The fucking MEMES. Keanu in cyberpunk has made everyone bonkers
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    E3: Expectations and Extra. (E3EE)

    Fallen Order looks like a reskinned jedi themed titanfall. Or if star wars had a baby with dark souls. Just had that sorta DS combat feel to it. Not bad. All good games. But almost all past star wars games I remember have been linear single player. This isn't anything new. "Single player is...
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    What genres are you used to writing?

    Porn. Im used to writing porn.
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    Help with synopsis?

    My own first blurb: A Dashing spaceman out on a trip with his two best buds. A world turned prison. Join these three unlikely heroes as they face off against Lovecraftian monsters at the bottom of an ocean floor!
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    Writing Prompt In a world where giant crabs roam the surface one man...

    ....Was free from the STD plaguing the world. The last virgin straight man. His balls pristine, unmolested by the viral hands of men. And women. And Apache helicopters. How far can this plucky young fox go in a planet of enflamed crotches? Find out next time on...Crabby BallZ!
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    When is a Chapter too Long?

    Anything past 4000. But I take a while to post chapters sometimes so I make up for it with long chapters around 5000 and I never see complaints. Personally I think you only really get tired when the chapter isn't interesting enough to support such a length. Eastern novels like to drone on and on...
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    What's the difference between Adult and Mature?

    I always thought of mature as rated R and adult as at least the story having softcore porn moments
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    Can you guys critique my first chapter?

    what a coincidence then. I write it when im procrastinating too! By the way, just started reading your story. Seems refreshing, dont usually read science-fiction-y stuff. Dialogue seemed a bit off at times though. Not awkward but i dunno, the wayit was done. I suggest using italics for people's...
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    Can you guys critique my first chapter?

    Well yeah but I'm a chart topper--tail end, really, but still--almost every time I release a chapter I just have infrequent postings--Dunno how many noticed but I've been on there like literally ten times on and off. Pretty funny I you think about it. Heh But thats nothing special, you know how...
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    Can you guys critique my first chapter?

    Holy shit. Well damn do mine next fam.
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    How do you plan out your story?

    I dunno man i plot out the general direction i want, the major events, the mysteries and reasons behind certain things, but beyond that i just dick around and people fucking love it apparently. Its a story that i feel survives on the references and memes and my MC's "no fucks given" sorta...
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    Great article on POV and narrative distance

    i had the same problem with first person. But then i realized there;s several ways to get around that. Like you dont HAVE to write only what they see. You can also write what they THINK they see. Specifically in others. It touches upon unreliable narration but is more akin to a colored lens. The...
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    Feeling intimidated by the bombastic language people use in their stories.

    Depends on what you mean by complex. Like bombastic. Thats a pretty rare word to use. And if a writer uses words like that often then it means they're likely pretentious asshats who use unnecessarily obscure words to pretend they're smart. ature. And not even that often, just to be more accurate...
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    Chapter titles... What is your opinion?

    I realized during my time with early works i wont name that i quickly cant remember shit about small details sometimes. And going back to find what i wrote about certain things was damn near impossible when every chapter is just numbered. So much easier find things i wrote in the past when the...
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    What is count as Fanfiction?

    i would call it more of an easter egg, a tribute, or a reference. Assuming its an item or beast. If it were a character or something specific to that story;s universe though then yeah it would be a crossover.
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    What Happens Next?

    maybe you just aint good at writing comedy. Unlike me, who's god-tier, but only a bit above average at more serious stories. My arrogance aside, I already know my general plotline. Everything else is just detail work from getting to point C. Point A and B are the details. Usually i have no...
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