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  • I had a heavenly dream, a dream about a life I wish I have, a far-fetched life only in fantasy... God why are dreams so cruel?
    Satansoul
    Satansoul
    Well, at least you have good dreams, the last time I had a dream was just yesterday, in my dream they gave me a ruler and told me to measure people's dicks...:sweating_profusely:
    And I'm sure the reason for this nonsense dream was this @Kureous message.
    Kureous
    Kureous
    Dick measuring contest!
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    That'd sounds like a good dream
    Hello, I need help, if anyone can hear the chorus to this song and word it out for me that'd be swell, I'll do anything in return.

    Cipiteca396
    Cipiteca396
    What if I was Wrong, (I wasn't sposed to be here.)
    And what if what I saw, (Wasn't sposed to be near.)
    What if I shook myself,
    when I look myself, in the mirror? (Put everything clearer.)

    What if I was Wrong, (Makin' the right choice?)
    And what if I was down, (Hearin' the right voice.)
    And it told me to get up, x3
    And dust myself off.

    Cuz ain't no time for 'What if?'s!
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    Cipiteca396
    Cipiteca396
    May have made some mistakes, I'm actually terrible at sussing out lyrics.

    If that chorus were in any other song, I'd love it. Shame about the main verses...
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Nah I think that's perfect, thank you babe, love you.
    Hey, kid want some of that good stuff? Will cost ya three dollars. :blob_hide:
    Is this the correct use of the —? I don't know what it's called but people told me it's used like this.

    I walked out to see — A man with blue skin with strange face tattoos, another tall man with light skin with no ears, and a human woman in all black except for her big wizard-like hat — they were all talking about something something dungeon.
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    This is what I'd do.

    I walked outside and I saw them — a man with blue skin with strange face tattoos, another tall man with light skin with no ears, and a human woman in all black except for her big wizard-like hat. They were talking about something something dungeon.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Thanks dads and moms :blobtaco:
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    @LuoirM Sorta. This is more of a stylistic choice, but how you use them apparently tells a lot about the author. For example, I could also rewrite them as:

    I. On the day of my middle school opening ceremony, back when I was still ashamed of my mother, she had been extra fussy with my hair(...)
    II. That was what she was: a liar.

    Use them sparingly, in my opinion.
    I got a recipe for a late night high-on-weed-with-the-homies drinks from the lyrics of a music video (Khấn Còi by G.Family if you're curious)

    "Scotch và Sprite là 3/2 và pha đá" which translated to "3 part scotch, 2 part sprite, mix it with ice"

    Anyone gonna try this? I'm not allowed near wine
    A slight jab of how often I've seen fantasy media just randomly throw in explainations for the audience without anyone asking:

    "I've just demonstrated her power to her, so I twisted my energy to prepare a fire spell before using the essences around her to cast it."

    "Why are you speaking like you're explaining magic to some audience?"
    On one hand, I would like to be a random soul in the ever floating world that focused on its goal to the end of the journey where he'll sleep daily next to heaven, alone, romantically staring at the night sky

    On the other hand, I miss her and I kinda want the validation she gave me once again..
    My story got a lot of traffic, as in views, readers, favorites, etc. But never, ever, nada, basically 0 comments. Does this mean my story's not on the comedic side?
    I would either leave town covered in bruises or covered in handprints, and my fate was not in my control, in my will no more. Maybe, just maybe, it is like what I've once read of Michel de Montaigne: “In a great storm, sailors in ancient times invoked Neptune: O God! You will save or destroy me according to your will. But whatever you will, I will steer my ship as necessary!”
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Ohio.

    Florida would be more of Hải Phòng or sumin.
    Rhaps
    Rhaps
    Hải Phong is more like Detroit imo.
    And you're correct, your place is definitely more Ohio.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Florida is just on some different fucking spectrum I ain't able to compare.

    But, wild people with wild pets, probably somewhere in Tây Nguyên or Bắc Trung Bộ ig
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    Expectation: I didn't post anything after 3 days of trying
    Reality: I wrote 3000 words, it's just that the chapter's long, don't put yeself down.
    There could be people I know in that crowd, people I've interacted with, people I've slept with. The thought alone humiliate a fragile-by-time soul like mine enough, the air was getting thicker, the voices were getting louder and my mind were getting filled with animated tangled strings.
    Suggestion needed:
    Sound for continuous slapping, a woman bitchslapping another woman, but it goes on for a long time so it shouldn't sound too weird, should I use "tap" "slap" "bap" "chad"?
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Tonight pls daddy
    RepresentingWrath
    RepresentingWrath
    I'm on it.
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    I don't think using onomatopoeia is a good idea. And even if you do use it, try something unique and perhaps make an analogy or metaphor to describe. Whatever you'd think would work better.
    It was one of the happiest moment since I'm into town, even though everything leading up to that was insignificant for me to feel like that. And I should have guess that I was, just, a little, too happy, as I the moment went into hell.

    The door to the room slam open.
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