Chapter 1 revision complete. I wouldn't say it's a huge overhaul, but it's probably a bit better now. If anyone who's seeing this happens to have read the first chapter, I'd appreciate you checking out the revised one and telling me if it's any better
I have a sneaking suspicion that Webnovel may or may not be filled to the brim with bots. I got like, nearly a hundred views in about half an hour. Something is afoot...
I've updated my chapters a little bit. Chapter 4, which I wasn't vey happy with before, seems a bit better now. Chapter 5 seems fine, but maybe I'd better give it a quick look-over just in case

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