LuoirM

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  LuoirM

• Feb 26, 2024

"In a great storm, sailors in ancient times invoked
Neptune: O God! You will save or destroy me according to your will. But whatever you will, I
will steer my ship as necessary!”

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  LuoirM

• Feb 25, 2024

Can anyone help me improve this sentence while keeping the structure?

"Good," Emily chimed in, her hat started wiggling in spite of the lack of a breeze."

Two uses of the word "of" near each other ticks me the wrong way.

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  LuoirM

• Feb 25, 2024

"pant my ass off" is a really weird sentence I'm about to use.

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  LuoirM

• Feb 24, 2024

I looked at him, tried to smile as always, but came off a bit passive aggressive:"I wish to never have this body again, and my spirit is broken, what's left of my identity is my mind, though I can not make bread from that."

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  LuoirM

• Feb 24, 2024

I got a stuffed nose abd imagine what if tomorrow both nose stuck and I die cant breath

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  LuoirM

• Feb 24, 2024

God, should I forgive humanity?

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  LuoirM

• Feb 24, 2024

My cat acted strangely, yesterday he didn't want to eat what mom gave him, this morning he doesn't ask for food the first thing when my dad wake up (very out of character of him) and he's gone missing since the morning, no one could find him.

I searchc for him under the beds, none, when I was down in the kitchen, I got just the instinct, I didn't know if it was animal instinct or not, to just "meow" and I heard ver

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  LuoirM

• Feb 22, 2024

People love pets because pets rely on them and never grow up to start their own family in Australia. Does that mean people actually love the idea that they're important?

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  LuoirM

• Feb 19, 2024

Wrote some words, more tmrrow, random question. Anyone wanna use their name for random upcoming characters in my story? No characterizAtion tho

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  LuoirM

• Feb 19, 2024

Don't anyone dare to try and scan my QR code

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  LuoirM

• Feb 19, 2024

My character never speak abbreviation, so how do I say don't you dare? "Do not you dare?"

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  LuoirM

• Feb 19, 2024

Is it "One of the worse" or "One of the worst"

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  LuoirM

• Feb 18, 2024

Haven't been able to write anything, this is horrible, I hate this state of peacefulness. Tomorrow I'm going back to school, there's gonna be chaos, there's gonna be distractions, maybe I can do it there.

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  LuoirM

• Feb 18, 2024

If time is made by god to defeat me, I shall kneel.

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  LuoirM

• Feb 17, 2024

Omg I thought up of a strategy using niche concepts/normal human things in a fantasy fight instead of just "magic spell go brr" like before and I'm proud

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  LuoirM

• Feb 15, 2024

500 words... Yay

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  dummycake

• Feb 15, 2024

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  LuoirM

• Feb 15, 2024

I recorded my last wish in case anything ever happen (not by me, but I just feel like god is toying, that mf)

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  LuoirM

• Feb 14, 2024

Idk if it worth sharing but my tiktok livestream got around 200 views

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  LuoirM

• Feb 14, 2024

Every time this happens I want to kill myself because I know something like that isn't possible in this world.