lizzyrose

Hey everyone!
I know some parts of the story might have been a little confusing, and I really appreciate you sticking with me.
I’ll be posting a bonus scene soon that shows the first time I met Damien—full of awkward sparks, first impressions, and all the little things you didn’t see before.
Keep an eye out for it—I can’t wait to share it with you all! Thanks again for reading and supporting the story

I just dropped a chapter of my story and I’m trying to improve my writing

I’d really love feedback on:
– pacing (does it feel slow or rushed?)
– characters (do they feel real?)
– emotional impact (did anything actually hit?)

Be honest, I can take it

When silence learned to speak