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Named myself Lizzyrose ‘cause my FF account auto-generated Rose and I wasn’t ready to drop diamonds to change it. Was gonna go with ‘softshadowed’ but… meh, old habits die hard 😂

She forgot how to act normal… how do you stay quiet when your heart screams his name? When Silence Learned to Speak is here, and the first chapter is ready for you. When silence learned to speak

My MC in a horror movie would be terrified but trying not to show it, making jokes to cope—like muttering, “Yeah, that chainsaw totally makes sense.” She’d probably wander off against everyone’s advice, but her brain’s always racing, figuring out how to get out alive. And in the end? She’d...

Thanks for checking it out and sharing your thoughts. I see what you mean about the pacing and the quick emotional shifts, I’ll keep that in mind as the story develops. Some of it is intentional, but I get how it can come across. Glad you enjoyed the dialogue and picked up on the dynamics.

Thank you for reading and for the detailed feedback, I really appreciate it. I understand what you mean about the pacing, especially the dinner scene, and I’ll work on that. I also like your point about showing Damien’s character through others’ reactions, that’s really helpful. I’m glad the...

Thanks so much for the extra thoughts! Honestly, I didn’t take it the wrong way at all — I was really happy that you all took the time to read my story and give me such thoughtful, exclusive feedback. 💛 About the synopsis: I actually intended to add a bit of mystery to hint at Rose’s...

Hey everyone! 👋 I know some parts of the story might have been a little confusing, and I really appreciate you sticking with me. I’ll be posting a bonus scene soon that shows the first time I met Damien—full of awkward sparks, first impressions, and all the little things you didn’t see before...

Thank you for this, I really appreciate you taking the time to go into so much detail. I won’t lie, it was a bit overwhelming at first 😭 but I can see what you mean, especially about the pacing and how my scenes move too quickly. I think I’ve been rushing to get through things instead of...

I just dropped a chapter of my story and I’m trying to improve my writing 🖤 I’d really love feedback on: – pacing (does it feel slow or rushed?) – characters (do they feel real?) – emotional impact (did anything actually hit?) Be honest, I can take it 🙂 When silence learned to speak

Hope you enjoy:s_smile: When silence learned to speak

This is my first story on ScribbleHub, so I’d really appreciate any feedback you have. I’m especially interested in how it made you feel while reading. When silence learned to speak

Sometimes I reread my old work and wonder why I even started it… and other times I’m just sitting there like—why didn’t I finish it?

I just dropped a chapter of my story and I’m trying to improve my writing 🖤 I’d really love feedback on: – pacing (does it feel slow or rushed?) – characters (do they feel real?) – emotional impact (did anything actually hit?) Be honest, I can take it 🙂 When silence learned to speak