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YukieSama reacted to ConansWitchBaby's post in the thread Paralysis to start due to limited vocabulary and inability to convey ideas or create an intriguing story with
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Cross your fingers and just hope you are perfect to get it on the first try. Like me. Anyway. Even with limited vocabulary you can... -
YukieSama replied to the thread Editing Non-english writters. How do you know that you are written right for english language standars?.Short term, LLM would be your best bet i.e claude/chatgpt. It'll obviously lose nuances and things that make your writing you but if you...
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YukieSama replied to the thread How to know whether you are over-describing or under-describing?.Yes it'll be okay. But don't let it stop you from learning more about the craft and more on how to advertise your webnovel. For example...
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YukieSama reacted to TASTYLEADPAINT's post in the thread Please check out 7 Entities - Fantasy, Psychological, Space. with Like.
1 major piece of feed back is paragraph spacing or just using paragraphs at all Reading your 1st actual chapter...
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YukieSama reacted to blackcrowcrowd's post in the thread Recommendations Good wish fulfillment brainless stories? with Like.
I don't want to get immersed, I just wanna feel some good shit that isn't really garbage. It could be YOUR story, a story you read...
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YukieSama replied to the thread Christian Western Superhero.I am curious what is a christian superpower? From a quick google I got this: Spiritual gifts, virtues, and divine enablement stemming...
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YukieSama replied to the thread How to know whether you are over-describing or under-describing?.Your chapter 8 is a better reading experience than chapter 1. I think I remember reading your first chapter 1 unedited and this edited...
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YukieSama reacted to Tempokai's post in the thread How to know whether you are over-describing or under-describing? with Like.
I don't know if this would help you, but you need this: Your story has that mismatch. The premise and the progression is too logically...
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YukieSama replied to the thread How to write without heavy repitition of certain pronouns and overstacking descriptions?.Mix in the names of the characters and sometimes make the object the subject. He ate an apple. The apple was eaten. But yeah edit the...
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YukieSama reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread How to write without heavy repitition of certain pronouns and overstacking descriptions? with Like.
Edit chapters before releasing them. Don't overemphasize the speed of chapter release; consider the narrative quality of the chapter...
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YukieSama replied to the thread Are litrpgs modern pulp fiction?.I wouldn't say litrpg's specifically more like webnovels in general. Another comparison would be pulp fiction publishers usually paid...
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In my personal experience, and I'm being serious here when i say this, a serious ass kicking also can change this behavior. I get along...
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YukieSama replied to the thread Family Drama (advice).I haven't had a direct family member but rather a cousin, I won't go into detail but she's the reason I don't really interact with that...
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YukieSama reacted to Kurayami's post in the thread Is your short story seen as incomplete? Here's why! with Like.
The thing that immediately grabs my attention is that this puzzle piece doesn't fit!
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YukieSama replied to the thread Got my first real compliment.I'm sorry but I find that hilarious. It reminds me of the seinfeld episode where George gets tied up and robbed by a woman only to find...