Recent content by JYLewis

If you don't want it then don't comment I have had 3 ppl message me about it What is that haha

Yet proof-reading/editing is where most of the stories on here are struggling the most.

Will do yours also

I am up link in signature will get to it a bit later.

Thank you for the post. I habe tried posting things in the "hey post all your chapters here for feedback" and they get drown out almost immediately. As for editing I had to unfortunately write this on a phone as I am not home to do proper edits as of now. So your advise is duly noted. I got 3...

Hey folks. I just released my first chapter for the writing contest thingy mabob. Hope you guys give some good feedback. Even if I don't win or anything I plan finishing story regardless. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/236521/fantasy-of-ash-and-blood/

I would say basically. Webnovel and swordstory. They are all similar vein. I habe enjoyed them so far they good ppl. I am not particularly attached to any platform or site so I had no problem contractin one of my stories I am actively writing.

It isn't publication service dork. It is a site where you can post for free. You can also exclusively publish with them for some some benefits. So it is called contracted story. It really isn't that hard to google with respect.

Japanese have some great ideas in terms of worldbuilding, even writing style, and the overall plot is great. They really seem to struggle not making every character a one-dimensional trope (there are exceptions of course). That isn't to say it is bad it just would be nice for a LN or WN from...

One story that just began to drag and got extremely repetitive is on Royal Road Every Body likes Large Chests.

Love the cover art. It really draws you in. Love that style. Might change my own cover to match that style in the future. It is generic and was free so can't complain though. Will read when I have some free time.

I've heard great things about Youjo senki the anime itself was fantastic.

Two things will break a story for most. Grammar (even a really basic spell check and proof-reader can fix this). Secondly plot seeming directionless and repetitive with no clear goal. World building is almost always okay for most people and the story itself is almost always interesting...

Will do give mine a read also :P

Well you can give mine a read I tried to steer clear of those. I am a bit tired of the "overpowered/chosen one" trope anyways.