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    New author looking for feedback on first writing attempt

    Thank you for your feedback. While writing the first chapter, I spent more time wrestling with POV and tensing than I did writing it :ROFLMAO:. Glad you like it, will go back and edit that section to fit the POV I want it to. Swapping from DND third to solely first was a big hurdle.
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    New author looking for feedback on first writing attempt

    Hello to anyone who may pass by this. I am an amateur writer who decided to start because story crafting DND was too much fun for a weekly session. I've been on the readers' side of manga, web novels, and light novels for almost 10 years at this point. Due to the lack of any large mainstream...
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