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Short chapter? Perfect for reviewing. Let's crack this bad girl open and check what's under the hood! Clean up dialogue by merging it...

Romance is like pineapple on pizza. Not for everyone, and a pizza still can be every bit as delicious without it. If you don't enjoy...

There's another possibility: aromantic. This type typically struggles to feel romantically attached to others, has difficulty falling in...

Well it's a loose order, and not every description will be applicable to every situation. But the baseline is light (we need to know how...

I read the opening of chapter 1 and the opening of chapter 6. Focusing on the opening because that is where description is most...

An awful lot of the time, it's not about quality, it's about marketing. Some truly bad novels have been super popular. Now if they're...

I've only read snippets of chapters in this thread... why do you always open chapters with characters? This is very susceptible to white...

+1 for Against the Storm, it's lovely.

Brotato ... does that count?

You can't be inspired if you're not inspiring yourself. I can just keep going and going and going and going and going and going my...

Hm ... how to put this ... delicately. Instead of internet-based titillation, staying up at night making up exciting scenarios in my...

So the other people here gave some good answers to a lot of your questions. But since you were also looking for feedback, I thought I'd...

I am now your Zombie Queen, because I got the best ending. Bow before me and my undead legions! And quake with fear!

I only fall into most of those stereotypes, thank you very much! lol

I actually have all the drafts of my first book saved. Also written in highschool. And dear satan, the first draft is the worst thing I...