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Mannequins with faces drawn on them. Not just one ... but hundreds ... all around. At a wig shop. They were just ... watching me. No...

Sounds good. Of course, I'm sure you'll want to do a full edit to work out more of the changes you want to make. So I'll just focus in...

2 Fewer people means fewer variables to deal with while already stressed with figuring out how to survive. Especially when all those...

I've been influenced as much as any author by the stories I've read. But for the book I have here, I think I went the opposite route. I...

Great! thats exactly what i wanted tbh. As I said Im very novice as an author (Literally the most i did was translating two novels lol)...

That's great! I do recommend redrafting your first chapter with what you've learned. Just because it will help you hook readers, so they...

Hi! So I've been studying the first chapter. And there's a ton you do really well. You know how to concisely use language. You show...

Absolutely. Especially if editing is new to you.

To keep consistent with editing, you can't let yourself think of everything. All your works, all the ways they could be improved. Do...

I agree. I suppose the more concise way to phrase what I was saying was that the OP needs to show *more*. I do see that the effort was...

Okay, if that is the only thing you want to know, I will honestly say that is not yet polished to the point where I could call it...

Your writing is stylized for a very specific niche of readers who aren't me. I want to be upfront about that so you know to ask feedback...

If I'm being honest, I would not keep reading. But that's not a reflection of the story you probably have going in your head. The...

Starting at the beginning. I never like to start off with negative feedback. But I do focus on it because that's how we improve. So let...

You're definitely getting more into the sway of things in the later chapters than the beginning ones. A reader can tell that you are...