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Ellie_in_Pink replied to the thread The Royal Seed: Awakening - Feedback please!.Going through the first chapter. Your descriptions and scene creations are pretty solid. I never feel like I'm lost. And it's obvious... -
Ellie_in_Pink replied to the thread Feedback on excerpt?.No worries. If you want it to be dreamlike, you should signal that it is intentional. Signal that the narrator isn't fully "conscious"...
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Ellie_in_Pink replied to the thread Feedback on excerpt?.I'm sorry, I can't give a number rating because it wouldn't seem fair. But I can give you some tips to help shape this up into a proper...
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Ellie_in_Pink replied to the thread How traumatized is your main character?.Well my character does, in fact, eat rusty nails for breakfast. So? With her *own* milk.
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Ellie_in_Pink replied to the thread How traumatized is your main character?.In book 1? Oh, just some general PTSD. By book 6? Out of her effing mind.