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I am stalking Rosica because she looks recruitable into the Enpire.

The highest level is the 'stalker'. They actively demands the next chapter, ignoring the author's needs of free time and personal space...

As @Eldoria once said to me, don't start with characters directly. Rather, set up the atmosphere with the room or environment the...

Be me *Found a ntr story* ew *its about yuri* heh ? *a girl is ntr'ing another girl who already has a girlfriend* Into the trash you go.

The basic level of reader is the 'listener'. They understand fiction through the explanations of the narrator. For example, children...

If I am understanding this correctly, I take you're on draft 0. You haven't even finished the story? It takes about draft 2-3 to get it...

I'd say do something fresh. If you still want to come back to your original story and revise it, do it after you've written another 2-3...

I've provided detailed feedback here: https://www.scribblehubforum.com/threads/feed-back-on-my-first-story-is-appreciated.27819/

@Eldoria : sorry to summon you, little one. but you might wanna read this synopsis, just saying. call it? My hunch.

We need more magical girls definitely.

Justice will be decided after it is served not before. Actually, I had to ponder that for a minute.

Wait a moment... @RepresentingWrath is a girl? :blob_dizzy: :blob_shock::blob_hmm_two::s_eek:

I leave you with this question before going offline: What's left for justice after the law dies?

Actually, no :blob_sweat: . This is like a far into the future kind of scene from my novel. So maybe in future, if I keep writing, it...

There's nothing I can do for you. Reading and rating are entirely up to the reader's preference. I also won't force myself to read...