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I've read OP's chapters and provided some feedback. I'm pretty sure this feedback is accurate and constructive. If OP could follow this...

I read your first chapter fully, and I don’t think your writing is bad at all. In fact, your descriptions and sensory details are quite...

The thing is I purposely don't want too many people to see it so I'll do a profile post on SH -> thread on SH -> thread on NU (?) as...

It's connected to me, yes. It's not a xenforo forum even though it looks like it. I'm just testing some things but I wouldn't call it a...

Just a quick comment, your chapter order is messed up. You should sort your chapters first. Edit: Wanting this feedback, I'd like a...

Dialogue tags are less aesthetically pleasing, but they're necessary for reader navigation.

I agree with your answer. Body language is a subtle expression of emotion. Showing emotions through body language is a great way to make...

Best Advice: As long as what's being Said, Felt, and Done is Exciting, and charged with Emotion, you'll keep your Readers interest --...

They sure are. Blame the whole instant gratification culture currently destroying humanity. Consumerism was bad enough, but at least...

Creative writing is like this too. Keep looking for imperfection and you will never reach perfection. It's a state of mind. The caveman...

The fact that the editing stage exists inherently proves that the work wasn't originally written perfectly. It requires numerous edits...

Good, writers should get paid for their work instead of relying on established big names to get famous and trying to earn dubiously...

SH once considered blacklisting FanFics from trending pages.

Nuh-uh, i think that's something that mostly authors knows because they need to distribute their works, not casual readers especially...

It's possible for a work to be perfect from the start. The cost is that since it's already perfect, it will no longer have any rooms to...