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Eldoria reacted to TheKillingAlice's post in the thread [Pointless Rant] The Agony of Reading (Sometimes) with
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The thing is: I ranted this down from the perspective of a reader, but I'm also a writer. And it simply won't ever be logical to me, how... -
Eldoria replied to the thread [Pointless Rant] The Agony of Reading (Sometimes).Dude... your paragraph is gigantic, it's bigger than my phone screen. If this were a fictional narrative, I'd suggest cutting it down to...
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Eldoria reacted to Anonjohn20's post in the thread [Pointless Rant] The Agony of Reading (Sometimes) with Like.
😂 This person could probably roast as well as Tempokai does. A real talent. 10/10
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Well done. 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🐂
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Eldoria reacted to JayMark's post in the thread Feedbag Thread For Indie Writers of Original Fictions [Closed Till I Catch Up] with Like.
Overall First Impresion: Originals like this should have more readers. It's well written. It's good. I'm mildly interested in reading...
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Thank you for the clarification, this helps me a lot and motivates me even more
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Fanfics ❌ Originals ✔️ Translation of your own works ✔️ Translation of someone else's works ❌
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is it a fanfiction? No Is what you're writing original and your own IP? Yes
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what’s difficult? Telling somone what’s wrong. I’m too much of a coward. [I donated a chunk of money yesterday that I probably shouldn’t...
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Eldoria reacted to JayMark's post in the thread Feedbag Thread For Indie Writers of Original Fictions [Closed Till I Catch Up] with Like.
I need to read more. So I am offering my worthless services for writers of original fiction. 🐂 What I'm Offering: I will give my...
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Eldoria reacted to ConansWitchBaby's post in the thread How do I stop writing (I) in my first-person POV novel. with Like.
For the "white room syndrome" you got. For all the "I" that you keep sprinkling in. Stop being so self-centered. Should cut a little...
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Can you blame them? We authors can be a scary, needy lot, after all...
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Eldoria reacted to Parade's post in the thread I would like feedback on my first series (plus 2 chapters) with Like.
for the first 3 chapters its omniscient 3rd POV but will switch to limited 3rd afterwards