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Thank you so much for your feedback! <3 I use the em dash (—) because it’s the standard for dialogue in French, so I’m veeeeery used to... -
Eldoria reacted to Bane89's post in the thread Do My First 30 Seconds Set The Wrong Tone? with
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The person in the carriage is Liriel, and yes it is a memory. I explain it as the chapter continues, but I can see why it's jarring... -
I bet my last pizza slice they don't use forums, or it was VPN lol
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Eldoria replied to the thread How do I stop writing (I) in my first-person POV novel..So why not use the atmosphere to represent the character's emotion? This way, the environmental descriptions aren't just empty settings...
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Eldoria reacted to eagle_360's post in the thread How do I stop writing (I) in my first-person POV novel. with Like.
Sounds good but if I do it too much. I basically have no room for conversations and if I try to find new vocab to describe the...
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Eldoria replied to the thread How do I stop writing (I) in my first-person POV novel..In the context of first POV, white space syndrome usually occurs because the author focuses too much on the character's internal...
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Tried to find it again, didnt find it. (bc too new/niche/few chaps) Its not helping that there is a manhwa with similar plot that the...
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I am not very good at math, but the value of the sum of all numbers is increased when you're around.
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It's interesting but you are frontloading a lot of details with no anchor. While this could entirely be a stylistic choice, it depends...
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Eldoria reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Writing the Concept of Voidmeister Martial Arts. with Wow.
Almost, but Voidmeister technique didn't enhanced the user like Sage mode. Simply casting 'jutsu' using 'senjutsu chakra'.
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Eldoria replied to the thread Writing the Concept of Voidmeister Martial Arts..Hmm... I'm not sure. Is this technique similar to senjutsu (senin mode) in the Naruto series? Well, at least it's explained through a...
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Eldoria reacted to Bimbanana's post in the thread [Research and Experiment] What do you think is the moral of this story? with Haha.
Moral of the story? Adopt dogs!
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Eldoria reacted to HarryGarland's post in the thread Writing How to handle sensitive content regarding the mother's childbirth scene? with Wow.
Ooh, interesting. Straight up, I'd go for subtle. Because I myself had this scene planned for my third book, where my hero had to help...
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Eldoria replied to the thread I would like feedback on my first series (plus 2 chapters).Dude.. I've read 2 chapters. I want to ask what kind of POV you're using? Is limited third POV? Or is objective third POV? Or is...