Eldoria's latest activity
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Eldoria reacted to Parade's post in the thread I would like feedback on my first series (plus 2 chapters) with
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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2249744/urban-valor/ This is the link to my series that I am writing. I have currently published... -
Eldoria reacted to Bane89's post in the thread Do My First 30 Seconds Set The Wrong Tone? with Like.
That's a bit disappointing, I use em dashes to try to sharpen my prose and avoid overusing commas. But if I'm losing people at the first...
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Eldoria reacted to Hans.Edward.Trondheim's post in the thread Writing Starting from the ground up. with Like.
Overwriting the original works when you have minor/small revisions. Rewriting a story and keeping the original is good for proving that...
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Eldoria reacted to Zagaroth's post in the thread Writing How to handle sensitive content regarding the mother's childbirth scene? with Love.
I vote most strongly against clinical; the specific physicality of the situation in many ways is secondary to the emotional and mental...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Writing Starting from the ground up..Summon @Hans.Trondheim I once read his answer regarding a problem similar to your case.
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Eldoria reacted to Zagaroth's post in the thread Writing If your protagonist lived in the real world, what nationality might your protagonist be? with Love.
Well, all three of them are blends, whether comparing them to canon ancestry or RW groupings/nationalities. Mordecai appears to be some...
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Eldoria reacted to Juia_Darkcrest's post in the thread Writing Fictional race/ethnicities in story vs real-life counterparts with Like.
Hehe, I had a similar thought. If they ARE fantasy races I see no issues, If you are worried about actual world racism, take a look at...
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Eldoria reacted to TheKillingAlice's post in the thread Writing Fictional race/ethnicities in story vs real-life counterparts with Like.
To be honest, this sensitivity you speak of is poison to creative writing. Just make it make sense. If your world works the way ours...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Writing Fictional race/ethnicities in story vs real-life counterparts.Eh... do readers think that way? If so, their priorities might be misplaced. There are even more extreme narratives like murder, r*p*...
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Eldoria replied to the thread New author wanting feedback.Well, I've read chapter 1. I'll try to be honest and gentle (I guess). To be fair, I'll give you one strength and one weakness of your...
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Eldoria reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Feedback and/or discussion would be wonderful. with Like.
I read the prologue until chapter 1, for me your writing doesn't have any issue. Since I could picture it very well about the story...
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Eldoria reacted to Fondofwisdom's post in the thread Craving feedback vs. Staying motivated with Like.
A big part of why I started this story was to do something similar, but I cant pretend that discussion and feedback don't fuel me greatly.
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Eldoria replied to the thread Craving feedback vs. Staying motivated.When I first started writing fiction, I wasn't concerned with how many readers would read it; I was concerned with the content of the...
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Here's what I tell myself, Fuck the readers. They don't have any rights. The readers do not matter. I will change the tense midway...