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Dang, that's great character's POV subtext. It's very clear and pointed out to the plot subtext. It would be great to see from her...

After reading your comprehensive feedback, I can say your answer is... Thank you for this excellent feedback. It gives me the...

I feel like she's around four or five years old... let's make her four and a half. Reason I say that is because of her being old enough...

This is nobledark, or rather, grim's fairy tale. A dark fantasy seen from a child's perspective.

Oh shit, what i understand about this, is it some kind of grimdark fantasy? The way she describe the 'Mr.Dog' dancing after her mom...

But hans, writers cant read its in the name. :blob_popcorn:

Well, if what I provided is correct Long lines like these can be divided and shortened to give her a more childlike personality. Like--...

Her actual age is a secret. But the age range you provided is correct.

What is her exact age? Because a few lines(very few) feel a little mechanical for her age(since the whole chapter is in her pov).

Thank for your feedback. Caelan is indeed a little girl (not a reincarnated immortal). I asked her age to gauge how accurately Caelan's...

1. I feel like Caelan El Rose is around 5-9 years old, unless she is some weird immortal being that is trapped in eternal youth. 2. I...

I wouldn’t say it’s hard. you just need to be a little childish, like writing overly wholesome lines. I’m not saying it’s easy either...

Also, it depends on the child’s age. Nowadays, if you ask a 5 or a 6yo why they could jump higher on the Moon than on Earth, some can...

Idk about this. Kids can sometimes surprise you with their intellect.

Feedback for A Little Daughter Character Well, I rewrote one of my chapters with the first POV from a little girl's perspective. Here...