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I have no idea what happened, but we should all be writing anyway. That's why I have been less active in recent times. :blobreading:

So 50.1% of the whole story being porn without a plot is no-no? Damn.

After the Great ScribbleHub Purge of 2026, forum got lots of people complaining about their 404'd translations, and the fact that they...

A nice piece of action with a little thriller, but not scary. Though this might just be me. Imo the 'horror' comes from the unknown and...

I love that, and I love that you were able to experience that. Hoping maybe one of these days I can come across that experience for...

Well, I already mentioned "...appropriate to a child's psychological development," meaning that narratives from a child's POV should be...

Locking the thread for blatant hijacking of the topic.

I'm not saying you should be stupid. I'm saying you should adjust your intelligence to a child's level. To adults, lightning is simply a...

Narrating a child's first POV is one of the most difficult challenges in writting. Why? Because you need to "lower your intelligence"...

I intended to kill him off as an NPC. He was originally designed to be an annoying NPC. But unintentionally, his character development...

ooh im curious to know more about this, though! What could have been the reason why readers would mistake it for a retcon? Was it the...

I originally planned to portray the veteran knight commander Feroux as a tragic antihero martyr who atones for his past sins through...

It’s better, though a few things are missing: 1. Why drop the Paladin? The hint that a half demon boy has a saintly Paladin for a...

No No I read chapter one and it is like i read nothing at all, I will not continue. There is nothing about it that left an impression...

Ah i see what you mean. When i get time to work on chapter three i will take this into account. Thank you for leaving some feedback, though!