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I went to read the review and it's killing me It opens with "I am an expert in violent fantasies and I understand not everyone has cool...

Everyone is entitled to their own opinion and how they perceive something. There's definitely a difference between a factual error and...

I'm of the opinion that depicting something dark doesn't mean you endorse it. (But also of the personal opinion to condemn authors that...

Wait, including something in my story doesn’t mean I endorse it? I guess I’ll need to find a better way to communicate my love of...

What editor? Grammar editor? Well, Grammarly can certainly do it, but it's also limited. Grammarly just corrects spelling errors...

Well, I take my words back. I was hoping this fiction would at least focus to a family (mother and younger sister). Turns out I was...

Did doing your roast thread make it harder to enjoy some fiction?

Why are people giving feedback outside of the OP's question? Sorry, dude. You are unlucky. I only read the prologue once to gauge...

Stories have a fractal structure. So while you are writing one story, that story is composed of smaller stories called arcs, and those...

:blob_aww: I hope to get my edit run finished before you read it~.

Respect :blob_salute: Mass reporting a story in CNY until it get hidden is more evil than *1 bombing.

So the title to this thread says this: Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here If I were to go off of that title, I'd...

Right now? This reads like you are describing a trailer, not writing a trailer for the main event. Like, it feels like a list rather...

Yes, and fucking no. Will do, pal. Color besides the object. C+O. A singular drop of dark blood. Fix the wording. Present tense to...