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Well, showing isn't about providing a detailed story. This is a misconception. Showing is about leaving interpretation to the reader by...

Sorry, you're out of luck... releasing fiction on a busy day.

99.9% likely to be a scammer just from that blank profile alone.

Thanks for your assessment, Eldoria! The first arc of the story was also a growth arc for me as a writer. "Show, not tell" sometimes...

Well, I've read 2 chapters as a casual reader who happened to pass by and read them once to gauge the immersion. My general impression...

Just published the first chapter of The Secret Lives of Magical Girls. Even if no one reads it, I suggest taking a peek at the amazing...

I know. I was just saying that your statement doesn’t work for every author.

Well, you know what kind of fiction I publish... and you can always check it out at any time.

It all ultimately depends on what you write. If your work contains gore or sexual content, then the statement that ‘narrating fiction...

I'd show PoV or make emphasis of a character who feels that something is wrong. For example, my MC is an ex-slave. He reacts negatively...

To be fair, if a story has an action and there is no consequence to that action, even much later down the line, then I'd argue that the...

I acknowledge your surprise, but in fact, this situation didn't last long; he quickly broke free and regained his freedom. This wasn't...

My fiction is just an ant that is not worth paying attention to.

@Eldoria you might be next.

It took me a week for Tony to respond the last time I reported something to her. Wait and hope.