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Eldoria replied to the thread If you have time, could you please give me some feedback.Honestly, I was quite surprised to find Albrecht as the MC. During the first two chapters, he didn't have the qualities of a narrative... -
Eldoria reacted to Empire145's post in the thread If you have time, could you please give me some feedback with
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Yes, sir. But in fact, Fiona isn't the protagonist; the protagonist is Albrecht, but he's clearly in a passive position. Under Gurga's... -
Nothing like having inspiration hit after midnight. I began writing down ideas for book 4 of my series and now it’s 3am. At least I have...
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I’d also like to add that you can no longer lay down clues that only get revisited or revealed way later, and you can't start a plotline...
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Eldoria reacted to blushiemagic's post in the thread Feedback wanted for first few chapters of unposted story with Like.
Deep POV theory is extremely helpful, thank you!
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Eldoria reacted to Tetrahedron's post in the thread How did you start writing fiction in your early journey as a new author? with Wow.
starting as a fanfiction author in 2014 while finding the the platform FanFiction.net way back in 2013 (yep, roughly 13 years ago). And...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Feedback wanted for first few chapters of unposted story.Well, immersion isn't about how the MC thinks. It's about making the reader feel like the MC. You're free to explain the MC's thoughts...
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And I just recently got back from work too. I'm pooped. :blob_sleep:
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Eldoria reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Feedback wanted for first few chapters of unposted story with Love.
It's about immersion. You, me, everybody being in their head doesn't make us them, but it does let us experience the world as they do...
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Time to create a new feedback thread guys
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Eldoria reacted to TheIcMan's post in the thread Feedback wanted for first few chapters of unposted story with Like.
Hmm. Gotcha. I feel like it'd be a much easier read if you named the two girls immediately: That way it's easier to associate the...
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Eldoria reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Feedback wanted for first few chapters of unposted story with Like.
I'll get around to this. :blobthumbsup: