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It's kind of a weird situation where Rayna and Lillian each have their own personality but they both still share the same mind, so the...

Yeah I'm confused with the pronouns. Is Thomas they now because he's two girls or what?

Just to clarify something before any of us get into this: are we dealing with one person possessing the bodies of two others or does...

Wait what? Since when are first person pov's always supposed to be making the reader the main character? Have I been reading wrong? Was...

No issues. I'm just amused how quickly you got to it, that's all. Thanks for getting to them. :blob_cookie:

Ah, you beat me to that feedback thread. :sweat_smile:

Dude, I'm not trying to compete with anyone. I'm just stating what I read and felt. Sorry, I didn't see your feedback earlier. When I...

Got my start writing (badly) illustrated short "graphic novels' (of one to four pages in length - I was six or seven). From there, I...

Well, I position myself as a casual reader who just happened to pass by and read it once to gauge immersion. My brief impression is...

One profound thing taught to me by CNs (chinese novels), is, to be a good author, you need foremost be a reader. (their author notes...

I’m hoping my third book doesn’t end up in the fiction graveyard. I’m 40,000 words in, and it’s taken on a life of its own. I am wildly...

Honestly, it seems like you've already got a pretty good idea for what you want to do, so I'd say do it. You're gonna end up pissing...

Writing complex fiction teaches us how to complete a work as an author. Narrating fiction that resonates with readers teaches us a...

That awkward moment when you trip on a rug and twist your knee. The dog just looked at me like ‘what are you like down here?’

I’ve read up to Chapter 2, and while there are many important elements, the frequent shifts in emotional perspective make it hard for...