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? ? You don't need to dominate the fantasy world when you dominate my heart. Happy Moolentine's day.

This further emphasizes why feedback (from human readers) is necessary. Authors' writing is generally intended for readers. An effective...

Absolutely. It sometimes takes me days or weeks later to reread my material and realize my mistake. And that's only because I may have...

It's almost 100k words. It's great.

Took me about 3 months, but I finished writing a book! My first ever book. I've always enjoyed reading books, and thought I'd try...

Writer bias is real. It explains why writers repeat the same mistakes even after reading dozens of creative writing books.

Does it make sense? Was there something I wrote in the scene that I lost you? Are there any points in this chapter that an earlier...

Honestly I think complaints about passive/active voice are bullish!t. I’ve been told by teachers and professors for years that I write...

Here's my advice... instead of showing off who you are, show off what you're capable of! Take a fiction that really needs feedback...

Two not just in the same day, but within the hour? This normal? :blob_unsure: Well, thank you. Looks like we are being fortunate today.

yeah, as Eldoria said, it's about the immersion. And for me it's still very hard to apply it, HAHAHA

Well, my story is comedy oriented, so there's not much to improve. I just have to watch out for plot holes and repetitive jokes.

I want to save the sentences as a quote. Thanks

I sought harsh feedback when I first started writing. A close friend read my first book and told me the prose was so hard to follow that...

As for me, I just write and don't submit my writing for anyone's feedback, even when someone is asking for self-recommendations. I only...