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Eldoria replied to the thread Writing What feedback do you need to improve your narrative?.Dude, I understand your feeling. Any similarities are purely coincidental. :blob_aww: Besides, I'm also rewriting my fiction. If I'd... -
Eldoria reacted to Deleted member 44974's post in the thread Writing What feedback do you need to improve your narrative? with
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A flow diagram or mind map. Breaking down every action and every beat and every element, explaining what works and what doesn't and why. -
Eldoria reacted to Rachel_Leia_Cole's post in the thread Writing What feedback do you need to improve your narrative? with Like.
Looking for moments that might draw a person out of the story. I have that issue, of having no one to share my work with in my personal...
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Eldoria reacted to Hans.Trondheim's post in the thread Writing What feedback do you need to improve your narrative? with Wow.
You're talking about my situation right there. lol Honestly, my friends can't/don't want to read my work for similar reasons, even...
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Eldoria reacted to Juia_Darkcrest's post in the thread Writing What feedback do you need to improve your narrative? with Like.
Plot holes! I missed something I thought was obvious until recently, then a new reader pointed it out. I read the chapter again and...
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Eldoria posted the thread Writing What feedback do you need to improve your narrative? in Discussions & Writing Tips.My question is, what kind of feedback would you like to improve your narrative?
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Some may know the SEA vs south korea drama, it is very interesting. Somehow, it united India and Pakistan, roped in Brazil. SK is high...
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1/10 advertising.
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Eldoria reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread #1 on Trending. Am I hallucinating or is it real? with Like.
Nice! Apparently I hit 12 once. Was down to 18 before I found out, and fell off the list, never to return by the next day.
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Their lie in february
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Eldoria reacted to CountVanBadger's post in the thread Recommendations Harem with no f/f-yuri with Haha.
I was going to suggest Snow White and the Seven Dwarves. Seven guys (eight if you count the prince) simping over one girl? Sounds...
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More like I can't think any off the top of my head; I don't really go for harem stories.
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Eldoria reacted to K_Nishi's post in the thread I will give feedback on YOUR horror story, or story with heavy horror themes with Like.
This is a complete short story (4 chapters), not a serial. I’m specifically looking for feedback after reading all four chapters...
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Eldoria reacted to RepresentingEnvy's post in the thread #1 on Trending. Am I hallucinating or is it real? with Haha.
If you can lick your elbow it proves you're not in a dream.