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Eldoria reacted to L1aei's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with
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Topic of thread: Does my hook work? Please be honest. What Topic Derailus Confusus said: So, you read what @Nihilun asked for, right... -
Eldoria reacted to Louhi's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
We still learned it the hard way. Here is my feedback for the OP. Only describe something if it is relevant to the current situation or...
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).Well, at least it hasn't reached 4 digit chapters yet, right?! We might be a little luckier than the others out there. Lol
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Eldoria reacted to Louhi's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Wow.
I had to rewrite over 136 chapters because Macha told me my narration sounded like an attempt to emulate some Chinese open-world gacha...
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).It's right. But I agree with his statement: As a author... I've also faced this dilemma. I even had to rewrite over 50 early chapters...
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Eldoria reacted to Louhi's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
But the most important thing is to write it first. You can make it good later...
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Eldoria reacted to L1aei's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).Honestly, this is helpful. But as an author... we might be forgetting a important thing: "cognitive bias." Authors often struggle to...
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Eldoria reacted to Louhi's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
This is Macha being gentle. You don't want to know what she can do if she is actually being cruel. She make Tempokai sound nice...
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Eldoria reacted to L1aei's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
And to add onto @Eldoria offering a chapter as an example, @Macha did direct the fella to a beginner's guide, so... yeah. :blob_okay:
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).I'd rather do what he asked to do to sharpen a knife than stand aside and comment on other people's work.
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).Well, reading my chapter is an option, not a requirement. It's easier to demonstrate a concrete example than to theorize abstractly. In...
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Eldoria reacted to Macha's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
Using another person's thread to make people read your story. Smart and subtle. More authors should do this. You know what else more...
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Eldoria reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
at my last writer's get together site, I got made fun of. My story itself *might* be okay, but I was addicted to newb writing mistakes...
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Eldoria reacted to Deleted member 34529's post in the thread Would my story do better here than on RR? with Like.
That's too high Things that are popular here will not get a high score in RR.