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Eldoria reacted to Xcalibur_Xc's post in the thread Looking for feedback on my first story with
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Eldoria reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Love.
Scene 1 is my choice. Honestly, and I'm not doing this to be funny or anything, I read Scene 2's first sentence and my attention waned...
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Eldoria reacted to Tsuru's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
Scene1. Scene2 feels like a poem. >Harry stood straight. He wore dark robes. His glasses were clear. His hair was black. I read that in...
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Eldoria reacted to JordanIda's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
Both versions contain both development and action. As I read them, I observe that the developmental elements are extraneous to the...
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Eldoria reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
best way I can describe quick how to do an intro. watch literally *any* james bond movie. Die An other Day is a perfect example. (just...
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Fun thing, a Japanese Manga won a competition. However, it was discovered to be largely AI written. The awards stand, but its...
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Eldoria reacted to Zinless's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Love.
I feel like this: Creates a far clearer image than the one on scene two: Despite giving less detail overall, I feel like the way...
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Eldoria reacted to RepresentingSilence's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters).Dude, I might disappoint you. I couldn't even read 3 chapters (or 4?) - I only managed to read 2 chapters before I ran out of breath...
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Eldoria reacted to LiteraryWho's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Love.
Very surprised Scene 1 isn't winning. It demonstrates much better technical skill (as a writer, I mean, not talking about the...
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Eldoria reacted to Nihilun's post in the thread [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters) with Like.
Hey everyone! First-timer looking for honest feedback on my opening hook (Chapters 1-3) I wasn't sure about posting here, but I worked...
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Eldoria reacted to Omarfaruq's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
Scene 2 because my story is comedy oriented, too many details hurts the comedy.
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Eldoria reacted to Jerynboe's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How does a character introduction impress readers? with Like.
Honestly both of them are moving too fast imo without other context if this is literally the first time we see Harry, but I prefer the...
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Eldoria reacted to JordanIda's post in the thread Are 'em dashes' a put off simply because AI uses it a lot? with Like.
Why would you run your text through an AI checker, ever? Why would you care what an AI checker has to say about anything you wrote...
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Eldoria reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Are 'em dashes' a put off simply because AI uses it a lot? with Haha.
After thinking about that, my mind shut down. I don't know what to say about that at all. I guess I could say since it still exists...