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I prefer opening chapter, "Lance", because it creates a subtle tension as soon as the door opens that makes the reader feel like...

I've read two chapters in one sitting... my impression is that your chapters are dense (character-wise) which makes it difficult for...

Thank you so much, i'll learn more about it :blobthumbsup::blobthumbsup::blobthumbsup:

Ah I see, if i want to use First POV, i should focus more on "what i feel" yes? Interesting, i didn't think about it. Thank you, you...

Exactly. In the literary world... this technique is called Deep POV (usually used in first or limited third POV) to immerse the reader...

Can you check out my story https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2154417/arc---the-blue-dragon/ And rate it

Well, if you ask me if this fight scene is clear, yes it is. But if you ask me if this fight scene impressed me? My short answer is NO...

As they both stand, I don't like either. I like certain points of each, but both could be written better. If I HAD to choose. Then I'd...

I popped out of a trash can. I was stuck in there for years. You'd be surprised how big that thing is. It's a dimensional storage space.

I started writing since I was 6 years old. I write in Latin alphabetically. It took me almost 2 years to learn how to write simple...

Hello, sis. You are back!

The best kind. I still have some friends that will brutalize my writing if I need it. Though, I don't need it because I am better than...

I personally love Maine coons and for cat fur color my favorite is black as my most loyal friend for 15 years of my life was a black cat...

I received a lot of feedback yesterday. My message was to position myself as a learner willing to accept mistakes and learn to improve...

I am confused. Are you wanting feedback?