Eldoria's latest activity
-
-
Eldoria replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.If you want to continue this chapter... please read the other 6 chapters...
-
Eldoria reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with
Like.
the *impression* I get, reading the physical aspect of the fight. How do I say this. I'm a writer, I damn well better be able to find a... -
Eldoria replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.Thanks for your feedback. There are two men in this chapter briefly as observers of the Clara vs. Erna fight. They are Commander Feroux...
-
Eldoria reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Haha.
I'll pretty much do anything, for a 4-pack of monster energy drinks and a pack of Marlboro Lights. *wait*, that didn't sound good...
-
Eldoria reacted to Deleted member 34529's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How do you place the reader in the third POV? with Like.
If I wrote it would not be able to resist adding elements of "wave" "wind" "Sea" and the add more human-ness to the field's pulling of...
-
Eldoria reacted to Joyager2's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How do you place the reader in the third POV? with Like.
I think that, ultimately, there isn’t too much of a difference between these scenes. The structural difference (the repeated use of...
-
Eldoria reacted to Rachel_Leia_Cole's post in the thread As a reader, what kind of protagonist would you be willing to follow in the story? with Haha.
When Eldoria and Eldoria meet ?
-
Eldoria reacted to Macha's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How do you place the reader in the third POV? with Like.
Same, I like to experiment by putting them in AI-detectors and use the one with highest score. The higher the score the more structured...
-
Eldoria reacted to RepresentingEnvy's post in the thread Writing [Sharing] How do you place the reader in the third POV? with Haha.
I like some aspects of both of them and would write it differently if given the chance. One thing I dislike about both is the repeated...
-
Eldoria posted the thread Writing [Sharing] How do you place the reader in the third POV? in Discussions & Writing Tips.Reader Position in Third POV Look at the following 2 scenes, which do you think is more impressive? Scene 1: Scene 2:
-
Eldoria reacted to Everrealm's post in the thread As an author, how do you feel when writing villains who commit crimes or immoral acts? with Like.
As a reader, I’ve always felt that villains are often where a story’s honesty shows up most clearly. Writing about immoral or criminal...
-
Eldoria reacted to Omarfaruq's post in the thread As an author, how do you feel when writing villains who commit crimes or immoral acts? with Like.
My story is comedy oriented so it's not a problem for me.
-
Maybe change chapter 7 to 1 and ssve the others in your draft. Theyre supposed to be used as reference for how you introduce the world...