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Eldoria replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.Well, I appreciate your feedback. However, the analysis in this thread only addresses the visual aspects, specifically in the reader's... -
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I understand what is going on but it feels like a Manga panel rather than a cinematic movie. It feels like a list of actions but that is... -
Eldoria replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.Your feedback is very detailed and technical. I appreciate your criticism and suggestions, especially regarding the choreography and...
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Under the lens of what you're aiming for El, this bit is exceptional. You're hitting all of the beats you're after to build visual...
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Honestly speaking, this is extremely engaging. The contrast between the Prologue, which depicts Valentina as a vampire in the midst of...
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Most of the books have digital art for cover (I haven’t seen any with traditional art except for "The Hobbit"). Now, I'm too broke and...
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Eldoria Well, you can take your time whenever you want. Have a nice day. answer: its work, it'll suck, lol. but how could I refuse The...
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.Edit: I don't know if this is good or bad... as you're confused, why is Erna's injury mentioned at the end of the fight? Because Erna...
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.Well, you can take your time whenever you want. Have a nice day.
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Eldoria reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
I know, right. Brace yourself. I refer to Eldoria as... little one, The Oracle, others things as well. now "el" sounds nice I'll pick...
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.Thanks.
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3.8/5
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There may be a small inconsistency between the initial description (“a complete loner who can barely hold a conversation with his little...
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Eldoria replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.I appreciate your feedback. Thank you.