The ai assisted story reads as ai assisted indeed.
As do many of the stories on trending, or with massive readership.
This is an experiment. I have little experience with AI and am trying to learn some things.
It's still better than a draft I tried to fix several times, which I kept an intact version of.
I may do another edit of the draft without using AI after doing this.
I'll have multiple versions of this story to compare like a little science project.
The original manuscript is a good story with a lot of sentimental clutter and tone shifts that I could never trim enough.
The story beats are intact.
I've read and approved every suggested change.
And my [No AI content] stories will remain so.
A [No AI content] version of
Mercenaries Don't Wear Blue will remain available on Space Battles