I finally hit 1K views on NeaNight!

[VanVeleca]

Topic? No, rather, your story presents your characters as minors with the blanket 'everyone is 18+' which is a contridiction to the actual story content that I'm not enjoying looking through. And now I just wonder: why elementary school? and not high school or even college?

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Again, if you feel upset it is alright if you don't want to continue reading. As for the setting, childhood trauma is one of the main themes of the story.

Why exactly do you want the characters to be high school or college aged? There are not gonna be any erotica scenes if you're hoping for that

 

[AliceMoonvale]

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Again, if you feel upset it is alright if you don't want to continue reading. As for the setting, childhood trauma is one of the main themes of the story.

Why exactly do you want the characters to be high school or college aged? There are not gonna be any erotica scenes if you're hoping for that

Because I'm curious to know why you specifically have characters supposedly 18+ in specifically an elementary school setting, a school meant for children. Think it's a reasonable question. After looking at some of it, the story reads as just adults so elementary school feels entirely unnecessary and questionable.

 

[VanVeleca]

Because I'm curious to know why you specifically have characters supposedly 18+ in specifically an elementary school setting, a school meant for children. Think it's a reasonable question.

oh ok

 

[Representing_Tromba]

Congratulations! I'm proud of you.

 

[thegingernut]

Is that… a big deal? Not trying to throw shade its just… I blew past that milestone unremarked and if I'm owed a cake I demand my cake!

I'm realizing I might have been setting unfair expectations for myself.