Got my first one star reviews kinda hurts.

Anonjohn20

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Most people only give 1 star or 5 star with nothing in between. I wouldnt take it to heart,
First of all, this.

Second of all, who cares if a reader doesn't enjoy your story? It is quite literally impossible for everyone who reads a work to like it. The whole point of opinions is that it's okay that they don't align for everyone.
 

Daeron

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Well, we can't make everyone happy right? Don't take too much mind if it's only one or two of them.
As long as you enjoy what you're doing, better keep moving forward :blob_paint:
 

Eldoria

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2 out of 4 books they really didn't like. I didn't think it'd be so polarizing. 5 star or 1 star.

Are they really that bad?
No comment (well, it's a comment).

Personally, I never rate stories I haven't read or that don't meet my taste. But ratings actually reflect readers' tastes more than the quality of the content.
 

AliceMoonvale

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If you write genuinely with passion and continuously improve, rating don't matter at all.

I've recently gotten my first 1 stars and I could of been bothered by it, but then I remembered that I have other 5 star ratings, so haters be in shambles cause I'm definitely doing something right. Not to mention, my own personal rating is all that matters because my opinion is superior to everyone else. I'm insane and I love my stories, you either like them or you don't, approval not required but definitely accepted.

However, if your stories relied on LLM usage, then I might see why.
 

Makimaam

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Artificial intelligence usage can make people upset, rightly so. Your work shows some hallmarks of it...personally I'm on the fence
"Some" is a generous way of putting it.

Not the prompt-bro kind, but the “please refine this and replace my voice” kind. And add an extra philosophical edge, coz that would supposedly elevate my prose, the kind meant to send shivers down the reader’s spine and prompt them to quietly close the tab with a lingering question: to one-star or not to one-star.
 
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Ok thanks. You are entitled to your opinions. I replaced the 1st law of theormodynamics with sex. And Clarke's 3rd law also with sex. And Homer's beer the cause of and solution to all of life problems. Also sex. And finally uncle Ben's with great power.... also sex. I guess I speak like an AI. Feel free to burn me at the stake for the scribblehub witchhunts. My proof of concept worked. Time for kindle anyways 🤪
You really want me to elaborate on that? Can you handle my unfiltered honesty?
Go on give me all your hate.
 
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Wamba2K

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Assuming its not ai, because benefit of the doubt or whatever. They seem really underwritten to me. Very vague and confusing to follow. It feels like you're just putting words together and not really trying to give the reader any real texture or visual to really go off of.

That night, they didn’t speak.

The gate had accepted them. The obelisk no longer pulsed. The path behind them was gone, and the ash around their camp settled like breath holding still.

Cirilla lay curled near the edge of the dying fire. Elric's back rose and fell beside her. Seraphine sat upright, eyes closed, fingers pressed to the glyph between her breasts.

One by one, they drifted into sleep.

And they dreamed.

In the beginning, there was only touch.

Skin met skin. Not as an invitation, but as a reminder. Elric’s hand on Cirilla’s waist. Seraphine’s mouth against the hollow of someone’s throat. The Rubian twins dancing circles around the others, laughing like joyous flames.

Breath thickened. Fingers mapped old glyphs. Hips moved in time to some rhythm that pulsed beneath the ash.

They did not speak names.

They moaned.. They gasped, sighed, cried out.

But no one was claimed.

No one was owned.

It wasn’t lust.

It was a completion.

Where once there had been pain—forced offering, tearing ecstasy, the Void ripping them from the world—now there was unity.

They touched each other with reverence. They held until shaking turned to stillness. When Seraphine cried out, it was Cirilla’s hand that caught her. When Elric arched, it was a nameless dancer who steadied him.

And in the center of the ash, their bodies knotted.

Nine forms moving, rising, falling.

A ceremony without an altar.

A sacrament without a priestess.

A binding without fear.

They came together—not all at once, but in waves. Soft, gasping, breathless waves.

And when it ended,

They slept inside the dream.

They felt it.

The ache in their thighs. The soreness of mouths kissed too long. The sweat beneath their skin that had not come from heat.

Seraphine flexed her fingers, trembling.

Cirilla sat up slowly, her breath unsteady.

Elric's eyes met hers.

He said nothing.

But in his silence, there was memory.

Not of names.

Not of love.

Only of being known.

And for a few sacred minutes, no one was alone.

But the Place of Ash was never generous without cost.

Their bodies pulsed with memory, with pleasure, with the warm illusion of completion.

Because the Place had given them what they longed for.

And now it waited to see if they would ask for it again.

They sat in a loose circle. No fire burned between them, but the air shimmered with residual heat, as if the dream had left behind its own hearth.

Lady Mira spoke first. “We all dreamed the same thing. Didn’t we?”

No one answered. But none denied it.

This is the vaguest sex scene I've read in my life. You say so much, but nothing at the same time. Why write smut story if you're going to dance around the details? Smut means smut! Commit to the smut!
 
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Assuming its not ai, because benefit of the doubt or whatever. They seem really underwritten to me. Very vague and confusing to follow. It feels like you're just putting words together and not really trying to give the reader any real texture or visual to really go off of.

That night, they didn’t speak.

The gate had accepted them. The obelisk no longer pulsed. The path behind them was gone, and the ash around their camp settled like breath holding still.

Cirilla lay curled near the edge of the dying fire. Elric's back rose and fell beside her. Seraphine sat upright, eyes closed, fingers pressed to the glyph between her breasts.

One by one, they drifted into sleep.

And they dreamed.

In the beginning, there was only touch.

Skin met skin. Not as an invitation, but as a reminder. Elric’s hand on Cirilla’s waist. Seraphine’s mouth against the hollow of someone’s throat. The Rubian twins dancing circles around the others, laughing like joyous flames.

Breath thickened. Fingers mapped old glyphs. Hips moved in time to some rhythm that pulsed beneath the ash.

They did not speak names.

They moaned.. They gasped, sighed, cried out.

But no one was claimed.

No one was owned.

It wasn’t lust.

It was a completion.

Where once there had been pain—forced offering, tearing ecstasy, the Void ripping them from the world—now there was unity.

They touched each other with reverence. They held until shaking turned to stillness. When Seraphine cried out, it was Cirilla’s hand that caught her. When Elric arched, it was a nameless dancer who steadied him.

And in the center of the ash, their bodies knotted.

Nine forms moving, rising, falling.

A ceremony without an altar.

A sacrament without a priestess.

A binding without fear.

They came together—not all at once, but in waves. Soft, gasping, breathless waves.

And when it ended,

They slept inside the dream.

They felt it.

The ache in their thighs. The soreness of mouths kissed too long. The sweat beneath their skin that had not come from heat.

Seraphine flexed her fingers, trembling.

Cirilla sat up slowly, her breath unsteady.

Elric's eyes met hers.

He said nothing.

But in his silence, there was memory.

Not of names.

Not of love.

Only of being known.

And for a few sacred minutes, no one was alone.

But the Place of Ash was never generous without cost.

Their bodies pulsed with memory, with pleasure, with the warm illusion of completion.

Because the Place had given them what they longed for.

And now it waited to see if they would ask for it again.

They sat in a loose circle. No fire burned between them, but the air shimmered with residual heat, as if the dream had left behind its own hearth.

Lady Mira spoke first. “We all dreamed the same thing. Didn’t we?”

No one answered. But none denied it.

This is the vaguest sex scene I've read in my life. You say so much, but nothing at the same time. Why write smut story if you're going to dance around the details? Smut means smut! Commit to the smut!
Valid point. It more fantasy with some smut in it than smut with story. Their are chapters were I go full smut. Not just every chapter. Also for context. The whole chapter is an homage to the movie 9 and half weeks. Old movie. They are having sex to charge up crystals to open a portal. Also the place of Ash is if "the thing " and the devil were a place and not an entity. So do smut ppl want full graphic details or something? Balls to the wall all the time?
 

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Assuming its not ai, because benefit of the doubt or whatever. They seem really underwritten to me. Very vague and confusing to follow. It feels like you're just putting words together and not really trying to give the reader any real texture or visual to really go off of.

That night, they didn’t speak.

The gate had accepted them. The obelisk no longer pulsed. The path behind them was gone, and the ash around their camp settled like breath holding still.

Cirilla lay curled near the edge of the dying fire. Elric's back rose and fell beside her. Seraphine sat upright, eyes closed, fingers pressed to the glyph between her breasts.

One by one, they drifted into sleep.

And they dreamed.

In the beginning, there was only touch.

Skin met skin. Not as an invitation, but as a reminder. Elric’s hand on Cirilla’s waist. Seraphine’s mouth against the hollow of someone’s throat. The Rubian twins dancing circles around the others, laughing like joyous flames.

Breath thickened. Fingers mapped old glyphs. Hips moved in time to some rhythm that pulsed beneath the ash.

They did not speak names.

They moaned.. They gasped, sighed, cried out.

But no one was claimed.

No one was owned.

It wasn’t lust.

It was a completion.

Where once there had been pain—forced offering, tearing ecstasy, the Void ripping them from the world—now there was unity.

They touched each other with reverence. They held until shaking turned to stillness. When Seraphine cried out, it was Cirilla’s hand that caught her. When Elric arched, it was a nameless dancer who steadied him.

And in the center of the ash, their bodies knotted.

Nine forms moving, rising, falling.

A ceremony without an altar.

A sacrament without a priestess.

A binding without fear.

They came together—not all at once, but in waves. Soft, gasping, breathless waves.

And when it ended,

They slept inside the dream.

They felt it.

The ache in their thighs. The soreness of mouths kissed too long. The sweat beneath their skin that had not come from heat.

Seraphine flexed her fingers, trembling.

Cirilla sat up slowly, her breath unsteady.

Elric's eyes met hers.

He said nothing.

But in his silence, there was memory.

Not of names.

Not of love.

Only of being known.

And for a few sacred minutes, no one was alone.

But the Place of Ash was never generous without cost.

Their bodies pulsed with memory, with pleasure, with the warm illusion of completion.

Because the Place had given them what they longed for.

And now it waited to see if they would ask for it again.

They sat in a loose circle. No fire burned between them, but the air shimmered with residual heat, as if the dream had left behind its own hearth.

Lady Mira spoke first. “We all dreamed the same thing. Didn’t we?”

No one answered. But none denied it.

This is the vaguest sex scene I've read in my life. You say so much, but nothing at the same time. Why write smut story if you're going to dance around the details? Smut means smut! Commit to the smut!
Oh. After reading that, yeah, that's very chatgpt language-coded.

not this.
not that.
only/just this.

Well, guess I'm on the evil bully team cause I can't overlook that either.
 
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