Writing ■■■■ beasts

[SRB]

I misread the thread as breast.

Dang, dissapointed.

Same

 

[NotaNuffian]

Same

Fantastic breasts and where to find them.

 

[SRB]

The animal I'll be using on is a polar wolfbear.

People who named that animal, would they go the extra mile to give it a personal name? Like we do with natural disasters? Or are we talking about the name for the whole speices?

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Bestial breasts.

 

[NotaNuffian]

People who named that animal, would they go the extra mile to give it a personal name? Like we do with natural disasters? Or are we talking about the name for the whole speices?

I am going for 3rd person limited view.

So all MC knows it is a polar wolfbear.

It is a limited event boss, so no designated name.

 

[SRB]

It was a joke only he will understand, sorry.

I remembered НЁХ because of that joke, btw. For non-Russsian speakers, it's an acronym, means Incomprehensible Fucking Bullshit. So, IFB.

 

[NotaNuffian]

Bestial breasts.

I recalled something about angry breasts.

Can't find it

 

[SRB]

Call the wolfbear Jerry, if worst comes to worst.

Maybe Abomination Beast? If it's all fucked-up and unnatural looking.
Wicked Beast is also an option.

 

[Hoshino]

Notice: Astral beasts, Spectral beasts, monstrosity, or odium beats etc nya.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Fiends! Something-something fiends! ?

 

[istryj]

Perhaps some ethnic motif that sounds obscure to the target audience might indeed be a good option.

 

[NotaNuffian]

Fiends! Something-something fiends! ?

Mutated fiends sounds redundant.

Like, dude is a fiend. After mutation, he becomes a fiendish fiend.

Magic fiend?

Demon fiend? Moon moon again.

Why do I need a prefix?

I don't, but I like to yap.

Also good for woed count.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Mutated fiends sounds redundant.

Like, dude is a fiend. After mutation, he becomes a fiendish fiend.

Magic fiend?

Demon fiend? Moon moon again.

Why do I need a prefix?

I don't, but I like to yap.

Also good for woed count.

Ok-ok-ok. Hold your breath for a second and hold your pants tight... Abberations. Although mutated abberations sound retarded, you can probably add something else and make it work. Vile abberations? Vicious abberations? Fiendish abberations? Magical abberations sounds nice in my opinion.

 

[NotaNuffian]

Ok-ok-ok. Hold your breath for a second and hold your pants tight... Abberations. Although mutated abberations sound retarded, you can probably add something else and make it work. Vile abberations? Vicious abberations? Fiendish abberations? Magical abberations sounds nice in my opinion.

Yeah, I am milking you dry right about now.

Also we are now in D&D realm.

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Ok-ok-ok. Hold your breath for a second and hold your pants tight... Abberations. Although mutated abberations sound retarded, you can probably add something else and make it work. Vile abberations? Vicious abberations? Fiendish abberations? Magical abberations sounds nice in my opinion.

Reminds me there is a map called Abberation in Ark. The creatures there are mutated to have bio luminescence. Abberant Beasts is cool.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Yeah, I am milking you dry right about now.

I instantly thought of that Skittles commercial.

Abberant Beasts is cool.

How come I didn't think of it myself? No wonder, after all, you are much smarted than I am.

 

[Fox-Trot-9]

Fluffy beasts!

 

[Tempokai]

The meaning of a word in its use in language. If "magical beast" fits to your story, why bother changing it? It perfectly encapsulates what you want to portray. Changing the synonym besides magical doesn't change the underlying fact that it's a beast. If you want to write with natural language just refer them as "beasts," "monsters," or whatever derogatory sounding simplification that says "danger." If the "magical beasts" are common enough, the language will commonify itself to the context, down to the most simple thing.

 

[Anonjohn20]

Call the creatures:

• Brutes
• Vermin
• Terrors
• Grotesques
• abnormal
• the mutated
• Aberrant
• Wretches
• Trespassers

 

[CharlesEBrown]

Fluffy beasts!

Nobody is ready for THAT horror. Nobody. Except maybe that person who does a lot of foxgirl stories.