Story Feedback

B
Very new writer looking to get advice on how to improve. Writing a niche story so be warned (Backrooms)
Replies
4
Views
397
Yuin
Yuin
GrotesqueHeaven
I ask for a feedback for my first ever written sex scene
Replies
4
Views
401
CharlesEBrown
C
Edeshei
First time new writer in this sitee~ Need some honest feedback to my story.
2 3
Replies
40
Views
2K
Macha
Macha
PlotTwistJosh
My first novel
Replies
1
Views
454
Dec
Dec
blightmansion
Feedback For Brazilian Writter XD
Replies
4
Views
307
blightmansion
blightmansion
CosmicWonder
I ask about feedback to my first ever story.
Replies
0
Views
209
CosmicWonder
CosmicWonder
P
The Ascendants: Early Years — Trial begins scene : New illustration
Replies
0
Views
152
PandaKen07
P
P
The Ascendants: Early Years — Trial begins scene: New illustrations
Replies
0
Views
136
PandaKen07
P
tantrayaan
First-Time Writer Here — Would Love Feedback on Yantra Protocol
Replies
7
Views
395
tantrayaan
tantrayaan
R
Was it obvious enough that the villain's plan would never work?
Replies
0
Views
213
Rookieqw
R
nyankat
Looking for feedback on improving my first work
Replies
0
Views
134
nyankat
nyankat
Pasta-Gal
Looking for ways to revise older work
Replies
3
Views
264
Yuin
Yuin
Yuin
Hi, pls roast a novel that I wrote a year ago
Replies
3
Views
277
Yuin
Yuin
E
The Host - Looking for Feedback
Replies
2
Views
249
unlaumy
unlaumy
Cookiez_N_Potionz
First Webnovel
Replies
2
Views
230
Cookiez_N_Potionz
Cookiez_N_Potionz
agnivrat
Drop the link let's review each other's work
Replies
6
Views
496
Edeshei
Edeshei
S
Story content opinion and what to improve/change
Replies
9
Views
660
Madmcgee
Madmcgee
Tripleblack
Looking for someone to review my work and I'm willing to do review swaps.
Replies
11
Views
805
Tripleblack
Tripleblack
D
?️ The Storm That Claimed Me - Feedback Request
Replies
3
Views
285
SurfAngel_1031
SurfAngel_1031
M
Critical review of my novel series , Bride Of The Blade.
Replies
14
Views
565
SurfAngel_1031
SurfAngel_1031
You must log in or register to post here.
Top