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Looking for feedback on my story, is it readable ?
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Shadowless3
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LeilaniOtter
"Strange Isekai Stories" Debuts Next Month!
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LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
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Can you please tell me if the action is unclear, if the dialogue is unnatural, or if I'm over-explaining or under-describing in this passage?
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189
empalgepuk
empalgepuk
Boundless
Story Feedback
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0
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81
Boundless
Boundless
_StrayCat_
Feedback Swap from StrayCat
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_StrayCat_
_StrayCat_
ADZER
"Hi everyone! Would you mind giving my book a read? If you enjoy it, I'd really appreciate your support to help it reach more readers!"
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240
CharlesEBrown
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Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]
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Para23
Para23
CinnaSloth
Hello.
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479
CinnaSloth
CinnaSloth
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Hello everyone!!
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465
LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
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Finally revised my story and posting it bit by bit. I need to know if the first chapter is a good enough hook or no. (Review swap obviously)
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2
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138
AimeEmile
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Hazzybae
I just revised my whole story?Seekers Codex: Beyond The Abyssal Line
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0
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143
Hazzybae
Hazzybae
Hazzybae
Magic System Feedback?
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3
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496
Hazzybae
Hazzybae
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HELLO GUYS HOPE YOU WILL GIVE REVIEW
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115
Sunflower465
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First Daft Chapter
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156
Gray_Mann
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Need reviewing
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3
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170
melchi
melchi
GiantFrog
My first fantasy ( romance light novel )
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123
R.G.Graf
R.G.Graf
RealRomanLord
Hey Guys!! Any feedback is welcome.
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95
RealRomanLord
RealRomanLord
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4 Chapters in, writing fifth, keen for some more feedback.
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8
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218
CharlesEBrown
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Can you tell me if the character changed her mind too quickly in this situation?
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2
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173
Rookieqw
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SuperMushroom
Can You Conquer The World With Martial Arts?
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7
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728
SuperMushroom
SuperMushroom
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