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Leonotis
Comic version of my story
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0
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83
Leonotis
Leonotis
K_Nishi
Looking for feedback on a short completed dark fantasy (4 chapters / ~2k words)
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1
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80
K_Nishi
K_Nishi
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New writer looking for some feedback
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6
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236
miralunem
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JUST GOT HERE
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2
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123
Noveloo
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Cookiez_N_Potionz
Feedback would be appreciated since my Webnovel is almost complete
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0
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61
Cookiez_N_Potionz
Cookiez_N_Potionz
C0NSTELLATIONBEANS
Does This Story Pull You In? Feedback Appreciated!
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10
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423
C0NSTELLATIONBEANS
C0NSTELLATIONBEANS
Nekyo
My Anime-Inspired Enemies to Something Story Voidlight
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6
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308
Nekyo
Nekyo
LuoirM
Very Unfair Story Feedback Thread
3 4 5
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96
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6K
MrShu
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Looking for feedback on my story, is it readable ?
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2
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142
Shadowless3
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LeilaniOtter
"Strange Isekai Stories" Debuts Next Month!
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2
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97
LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
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Can you please tell me if the action is unclear, if the dialogue is unnatural, or if I'm over-explaining or under-describing in this passage?
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1
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187
empalgepuk
empalgepuk
Boundless
Story Feedback
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0
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76
Boundless
Boundless
_StrayCat_
Feedback Swap from StrayCat
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1
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181
_StrayCat_
_StrayCat_
ADZER
"Hi everyone! Would you mind giving my book a read? If you enjoy it, I'd really appreciate your support to help it reach more readers!"
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6
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235
CharlesEBrown
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goth_dropping_in
Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]
5 6 7
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129
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8K
Para23
Para23
CinnaSloth
Hello.
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14
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447
CinnaSloth
CinnaSloth
O
Hello everyone!!
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9
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449
LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
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Finally revised my story and posting it bit by bit. I need to know if the first chapter is a good enough hook or no. (Review swap obviously)
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2
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136
AimeEmile
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Hazzybae
I just revised my whole story?Seekers Codex: Beyond The Abyssal Line
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0
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140
Hazzybae
Hazzybae
Hazzybae
Magic System Feedback?
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3
Views
489
Hazzybae
Hazzybae
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