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Playerkartik commented on Dec's profile post.Why did it even come to your mind? -
CCharlesEBrown reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread First-Person POV or Third-Person / Author POV? with
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i'm not going to address any particular post, i'm just going to say I don't agree with labeling first person as some inferior writing... -
Playerkartik replied to the thread Consistency.Yes indeed. I mean schedule does matter a lot in the early stages of the story. What readers want is, their story to be consistent. Many...
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CIt's a cliché, but it's quite effective in engaging the reader's emotions. Personally, I'd prioritize seeking out novels with a...
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CSee to me thats kneecapping your own story. The whole point is you want him to feel bad, or at least to grapple with something...
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Eldoria reacted to Hans.Edward.Trondheim's post in the thread As a reader, what is your attention span tolerance for the minimum and maximum number of sentences in a paragraph? with Like.
Hmm...I don't think it's just for light novels. Concise sentences and paragraphs are loved by Western readers as well, and that... -
See to me thats kneecapping your own story. The whole point is you want him to feel bad, or at least to grapple with something...
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Eldoria replied to the thread Story ideas.It's a cliché, but it's quite effective in engaging the reader's emotions. Personally, I'd prioritize seeking out novels with a...
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Add personal stakes and a down-to-earth background to make your readers care. For example, your protagonist is a poor, loving older... -
Our_Lady_in_Twilight replied to the thread Story ideas.See to me thats kneecapping your own story. The whole point is you want him to feel bad, or at least to grapple with something...
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TinaMigarlo replied to the thread First-Person POV or Third-Person / Author POV?.i'm not going to address any particular post, i'm just going to say I don't agree with labeling first person as some inferior writing... -
That sounds a lot like the second major arc (and only one I've heard most of) in My Werewolf System - except it's his mother and sister... -
Add personal stakes and a down-to-earth background to make your readers care. For example, your protagonist is a poor, loving older...
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Indeed, the fun in reading (imo, I can't represent others) is growth. And mister Mother's Milk here has none if he has super strength on...
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And then the invisible dragon killed the goat and was like HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA SCREW GOATS!