Would anyone like to read and give feedback on my first chapter of A Conspiracy for the Duchess?

[Sayakel]

Please find the link below: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/776719/a-conspiracy-for-the-duchess/

I look forward to your reviews and feedback!

 

[Rockingashe]

I honestly thought it was pretty interesting, the only thing that seemed weird to me; was in certain parts there were double spaces in between words. I know it's a weird thing to point out, but directing after it goes back to normal spacing. To me it felt like you typed something then changed your mind and didn't notice it. Example: They were walking in the woods. They suddenly heard a weird noise akin to an animals cry for help. For some reason to me the double spacing throws me off. Other than that I quite enjoyed it. I'm sorry if I'm rambling I am extremely tired.

 

[Deleted member 113259]

Seems generic, the chapter was short. Try to do something that separates it from all the other noble conspiracy novels. Otherwise, readers won't find a reason to read your one specifically.

Also when you put it on RR and Wattpad, provide links. Don't just say it's there. It's really easy to pirate someone on another platform if the readers don't know which version is the real one.

 

[Sayakel]

I honestly thought it was pretty interesting, the only thing that seemed weird to me; was in certain parts there were double spaces in between words. I know it's a weird thing to point out, but directing after it goes back to normal spacing. To me it felt like you typed something then changed your mind and didn't notice it. Example: They were walking in the woods. They suddenly heard a weird noise akin to an animals cry for help. For some reason to me the double spacing throws me off. Other than that I quite enjoyed it. I'm sorry if I'm rambling I am extremely tired.

Yes, I haven't noticed this error! I'll look into this, thank you!

Seems generic, the chapter was short. Try to do something that separates it from all the other noble conspiracy novels. Otherwise, readers won't find a reason to read your one specifically.

Also when you put it on RR and Wattpad, provide links. Don't just say it's there. It's really easy to pirate someone on another platform if the readers don't know which version is the real one.

Got it! Thank you!