What are you impressions of my intended ads?

[lambenttyto]

What kind of story do you think this is, and what are your overall impressions?

Looking forward to your feedback!

 

[MasterY001]

I'm getting standard middle eastern fantasy vibes. Genies, snake charmers, belly dancers, the whole package. Based on the tagline, I'm expecting two yoked dudes to arm wrestle over the titular magic girl.

I'd change the color of the font in the top one since its a little hard to read. How much did this campaign cost anyway?

 

[Valmond]

Aladdin FanFic.

 

[meza]

Where are you posting these ads?

 

[MasterY001]

Aladdin FanFic.

Starring Rachel Ziegler as Princess Jasmine (because Snow White is on Disney+ now)

 

[Rezcore]

Starring Rachel Ziegler as Princess Jasmine (because Snow White is on Disney+ now)

 

[lambenttyto]

Where are you posting these ads?

I'm going to put them on Royal Road.

I'd change the color of the font in the top one since its a little hard to read. How much did this campaign cost anyway?

Haven't forked out the money yet. I'm not ready to pull the trigger. I have a few more ads to make first. I want some monsters, I want one with the main character, and maybe something funny. Well, they're $50 per add on RR. I'm thinking about spending several hundred dollars.

 

[meza]

I'm going to put them on Royal Road.

Haven't forked out the money yet. I'm not ready to pull the trigger. I have a few more ads to make first. I want some monsters, I want one with the main character, and maybe something funny. Well, they're $50 per add on RR. I'm thinking about spending several hundred dollars.

Some of the text is hard to see. you should reduce it the RR ad size and test it on a mobile device etc [especially the white text]

 

[RepresentingWrath]

I think it looks nice, but I bet RR moderators will say woman shows too much skin.

 

[Ai-chan]

From the cover alone, looks like one of those harlequin romance smuts.

You know, stuff like Marrying A Millionaire After Pregnancy, This Man Is My Brother, The Highland Barbarian's Wife, Waking Up In Daddy's Bed, The Sheikh's Concubine, Temptation of the Moody Arab Prince, Pretend Date With Brother, The Beauty And Her Brother.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Temptation of the Moody Arab Prince.

 

[Representing_Tromba]

Seems very middle eastern inspired smut

 

[Puji-Maki]

Most promotion ads I see in RR are memes(that doesn't make sense). I'm not sure if this kind of promotion will work there.

 

[Alski]

I think it looks nice, but I bet RR moderators will say woman shows too much skin.

They probably dont care when its generating them ad revenue.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

They probably dont care when its generating them ad revenue.

B-but... moderator John...

 

[Alski]

B-but... moderator John...

Hes probably just a corrupt hypocrite.

 

[Arkus86]

I would say September 2023 has long since passed.

 

[lambenttyto]

I would say September 2023 has long since passed.

It was a random date because the ads are a mock up.

 

[lambenttyto]

lol

You're right, they said no, sooooo......

 

[CharlesEBrown]

As an aside, the use of the word "slave" May be problematic - PocketFM, for example, does not approve of it in the text (yet has "Shadow Slave" as an available audio series, go figure), and some sites may ban the ad for using it. "Servant," while a much weaker word, is less likely to ruffle feathers.