BeigeDragon
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I'm looking for feedback, specifically on if the hook is too long, or if there is anything that immediately turns you away. I only have several parts of the first chapter posted.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2342990/blue-culture/
General feedback is welcome. Roast me if you have to.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2342990/blue-culture/
General feedback is welcome. Roast me if you have to.