jtwrites
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Hey everyone!
I'm working on a story called Project Boomerang. It's a blend of fantasy/scifi with romance beats. I feel like my story is accessible and easy to follow. My writing is certainly better than it used to be. I'd like to think that I'm working on a pretty good story, but I need some outside perspective.
I'm open to any sort of feedback. I've posted 16k words (a prologue and 11 chapters). You're welcome to read as little to as much as you would like. But I'm wondering what might generate more interest and how I might improve the story. Do you mind taking a look and sharing your thoughts?
Thank you!
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I'm working on a story called Project Boomerang. It's a blend of fantasy/scifi with romance beats. I feel like my story is accessible and easy to follow. My writing is certainly better than it used to be. I'd like to think that I'm working on a pretty good story, but I need some outside perspective.
I'm open to any sort of feedback. I've posted 16k words (a prologue and 11 chapters). You're welcome to read as little to as much as you would like. But I'm wondering what might generate more interest and how I might improve the story. Do you mind taking a look and sharing your thoughts?
Thank you!
Project Boomerang
Seven years ago, everything Star knew went up in flames. She lost her life. And her love. “A freak accident,” some said. Only, it was Star who felt like the accident in question. She was the anomaly. The girl who survived. Iskyros was a new city. A chance to start...